Reviewer: Immunity
Date: 12/23/10 20:51
Chapter: Prologue

Hello :) I really enjoyed reading this one-shot.

I used to wonder about how George or the Weasley famiily would react and how they will get over Fred's death. For your story, you have portrayed his inner struggles and anguish convincingly enough and it is rather well-written.

The idea of Fred transforming into a ghost was extremely clever. Somehow, I had never thought of that. It is a rather new concept.

Well, that's all. I really enjoyed this Fred & George story. Keep writing !

-Jane (princessbipolar)
--Signed the Order of the Ravenclaw House Elves

Author's Response: Hi Jane, thanks very much for the review, and for the compliments!

Reviewer: snowyowl12
Date: 11/20/10 11:41
Chapter: Prologue

*sob* why cant I write like that?
*tear*

Reviewer: locanena
Date: 11/19/10 2:59
Chapter: Prologue

The Christmas Carol

Author's Response: Yes, it's what the challenge is about. Err... thanks for the review. Sarah x

Reviewer: CoolCatElly
Date: 11/18/10 10:00
Chapter: Prologue

Hi there Sarah!

I saw the poor sad 0 next to your reviews and felt bad. So I'm here to change that :-D

I love Fred and George, and I love the idea of Fred coming back to see George after he died. It makes a lot of sense, with them being twins.

I like reading different authors' interpretations of what George will be like after Fred died. Some think he would try and keep laughing and go into denial, some think he would crash, like you. I can see Molly putting on a brave face and trying to make things seem normal. So sad.

I can't wait to read more!
Well done!

xx

Author's Response: Aww, thanks, Elene :D I was in a bad mood, and now this has cheered me up. Thank you for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it! Sarah x

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