Ooh! I never saw this coming! But Lily was right- that relationship would never work. Great job!
I loved this! I've always loved Sirius. :)
Sirius/Lily pairings are definetly intriguing, I really liked this! Nice work.
Author's Response: Hi there, happy you enjoyed the forbidden fruit of Lily/Sirius. Padfoot is a very naughty boy ... Ta muchly for the feedback, CbK
I liked it! There is something about Lily/Sirius that is appealing, I thought that Sirius might have been a bit overplayed at first, but his reaction after the kiss was nice. Of course, I'm not convinced he was serious in wanting more, but it did seem in character. Lily was well-written as well. And the last paragraph - awww, it's like you're setting up another chapter! Good ending - or good beginning. ;)
Author's Response: Hi there, ta for that. It's the first time I've written Sirius and Lily, so the characterisations may be a tad sketchy - then again, they may be a fair representation, depending on what you like. *wink* Either way, it was a blast to explore a potential romantic encounter between these two! Ta muchly for the feedback. CbK.