Reviews For Unsuperior
Reviewer: Equinox Chick
Date: 12/21/10 4:26
Chapter: Unsuperior.

Aww, poor Ron.

Megan, this is sad. (I mean the sentiments and not the poem - lol). You've managed to capture Ron's feelings of utter worthlessness so well and I wonder whether he ever managed to escape the feeling that he was overshadowed. (I hope so)


I like your poetry. It flows well, but isn't over-flowery, so well done.

Oh and finally ... HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!

~Carole~

Author's Response: Oooh, thanks so much!! This was a fantastic birthday gift. I really appreciate it. :D Thank you! And I'm not all that fond of Ron . . . all the more reason I wrote this poem. :) I ship Harmony! Thanks again!!

Reviewer: Dementor97
Date: 11/06/10 14:20
Chapter: Unsuperior.

While i do not agree with your views of ronald, i do think that it was an interesting second attempt at poetry. But when did you become a pureblood supremacist? Are you becoming dark? WHATS HAPPENING TO YOU MEGAN!?!?!?!? But, still it is nice poetry:D

Author's Response: Ha, yes I am a pureblood supremacist . . . tehehe Thanks so much for the review! (And I am so not dark :<)

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