Excellent story. Well written and suspensful.. Can't wait for the next chappie
Author's Response: Thank you again, eniroc! I have had half of the next chapter written now for two months, but real life stepped in and mobbed me! Good news is that the end is in sight for a series of deadlines with my job that have kept me running non-stop since Christmas - so I hope to get up a new chapter at some point in the not so distant future. Thanks for sticking with the story! :)
very good story. Can't wai to read more. Well written and suspenseful.
Author's Response: Thank you, eniroc! I've been on leave what with Christmas and law school applications due, but the next chapter is in the queue!
Awesome. I love the part abot the rain, especially the last line-- "It should have been raining." It just gives the whole prologue an ominousous feeling it wouldn't have otherwise.
Author's Response: Thanks Megan! That was the mood I was aiming for, so I'm glad that's what you took away from it. :)
Love it! An excellent first chapter. Not much happens, but it leads me wanting more, so I will continue to read, and await the next chapter with much anticipation!
Author's Response: Thanks, Sdogg! It's deliberately vague, but it definitely sets the tone for the rest of the story. Glad you liked it! :)