Reviewer: kri
Date: 01/07/11 23:38
Chapter: Chapter 4: The Second-Hand Scarf


Reviewer: September December
Date: 12/08/10 18:06
Chapter: Chapter 4: The Second-Hand Scarf

Really good chapter, can't wait to read more!! :)

Reviewer: ShadowNeo
Date: 12/04/10 18:50
Chapter: Chapter 3: A Reason

I love how you always seem to find the perfect way to say what you want, like the argument between Albus and the Sorting hat. It flowed extremely well. I doubt that kind of a plot twist could be topped easily!
I cannot wait for you to continue this!

Author's Response: Why, thank you, I'm really flattered you think so! The Sorting Hat section in particular was a lot of fun to write, so I'm glad you enjoyed it. <3 The newest chapter has just been approved, in case you want to check it out, and hopefully I'll finish up the next chapter and update again soon. :)

Reviewer: September December
Date: 11/21/10 21:09
Chapter: Chapter 3: A Reason

OMG!! I can't see where you're going with this, which is good, it keeps me reading. Update soon. :)

Author's Response: Well, thank you! I guess it's good that my stuff isn't too predictable, I can't help but worry about that, when writing a Next Gen fic. ^^;; I've just submitted the next chapter, so hopefully it should appear within the next week! <3

Reviewer: September December
Date: 11/16/10 13:30
Chapter: Chapter 2: First-Years Gathering

Ahhhh! It ended to fast. So good. Update soon! :)

Author's Response: XD Haha, yeah, I had to unfortunately split what would have been the next chapter into two so that it wouldn't be too long, so this chapter ended a bit shorter than the first one. But not to worry -- I will try to post the next chapter soon! I'm glad you are enjoying. <3

Reviewer: LunaLover203
Date: 11/14/10 3:26
Chapter: Chapter 2: First-Years Gathering

Aww poor Malfoy those girls were really mean, please write some more soon

Author's Response:

Yeah, Malfoy's time won't be as easy as his father's was, the poor little bugger. XD Thanks for reviewing! Hopefully the next chapter will be up in the next week.

Reviewer: adithyabigal
Date: 11/04/10 18:44
Chapter: Chapter 1: Aboard the Hogwarts Express

this is kind of a nitpick, but in SS, Olivander says that no two ollivander wands are exactly the same, "just as no two unicorns, dragons, or phoenixes are quite the same,"

other than that, your story is great, can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you for the feedback -- I took that statement to mean, however, that no wand is made of the exact same materials, and Albus's wand is not made from the exact same ebony tree and/or the exact same unicorn as Snape's wand was...just the same kind of ingredients. So it's not exactly the same wand as Snape's. XD Anyway, thanks again for your comment! I'm glad you enjoyed! <3

Reviewer: September December
Date: 11/02/10 13:40
Chapter: Chapter 1: Aboard the Hogwarts Express

Whoa, nice twist at the end. Really liked the chapter. Update soon. :)

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! The idea was a bit irresistable to me once I thought of it, I love the idea of Albus having subtle similarities to Snape, albeit without the greasy hair and oversized nose. XD As for updates, I've just finished my next chapter and hopefully it'll be approved, so you should see it soon! <3

Reviewer: LunaLover203
Date: 11/01/10 5:11
Chapter: Chapter 1: Aboard the Hogwarts Express

James is horrible

Author's Response: Haha, yeah, he is a bit of a prat. XD

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