Reviewer: afterglow745
Date: 10/23/10 23:58
Chapter: The Longest Walk of Her Life

This was wonderful! Your descriptions pertaining to the emotion between Draco and Hermione is raw and tangible, and I was excited to find that it did not feel awkward, as it sometimes can, so soon into a piece. Hope to see more of your work up soon! :]

Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm actually working on a sequel to this one right now... :)

Reviewer: delila likes pie
Date: 10/23/10 21:03
Chapter: The Longest Walk of Her Life

this story made me cry....

Author's Response: I know! Me, too!

Reviewer: Redwing
Date: 10/23/10 15:54
Chapter: The Longest Walk of Her Life

Bravo, bravo! So beautifully written, so well built-up! I think I might have cheered some when he threw the door to the church open.

Author's Response: Totally! I definitely felt the moment as well :)

Reviewer: Kaiserin
Date: 10/23/10 9:12
Chapter: The Longest Walk of Her Life

Yay! Truly unexpected end! I thought you wouldn't give them a happy ending!

Greatly described! I liked it very very very much!

Just, everything! That first encounter, the affair, the fall out.... "I object" Pure bliss!

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you!!!! I'm so glad you were surprised at the end!

Reviewer: blackbeauty7
Date: 10/23/10 5:15
Chapter: The Longest Walk of Her Life

i think its amazing! please continue!!!

Author's Response: Oh I shall continue!! Watch out for the sequel....sometime soon...

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