Reviewer: afterglow745
Date: 10/18/10 20:26
Chapter: Chapter 1

Sweet and fluffy, but not at all out of character, and sticks to canon quite nicely.

'Smiling that secret smile that she did when she knew something he didn’t, Hermione said, “Oh, I know.” Snuggling into his side and sighing contentedly, she reiterated, “I know.”'

Hermione, spot on. Wonderful job! :]

Author's Response:

Thank you. Writing fluff is rather difficult for me, as I tend to lean toward darkness, death, dispair, and all of their synonymous cousins. I'm glad the characters seemed right to you, since it was my main concern. Can't have OOC, can we? lol

~Jess

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 10/18/10 17:52
Chapter: Chapter 1

lovely story! well done! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you. This is my first real venture into Ron/Hermione, so I'm glad it's up to par. I really appreciate you taking time to review.

~Jess

 

Reviewer: Virgil
Date: 10/18/10 17:24
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is cute :) Ron reminds me of myself in this fic, hehe. I think you portrayed the essence of the Ron/Hermione pairing very excellently in this piece ^_^ Thank you.
Peace,
Virgil

Author's Response:

I'm glad it isn't too awfully saccharine and isn't OOC. I really wanted to visit this moment, because after everything, these two would have a lot to talk about.

Lovely review, and thanks for reading. 

~Jess

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