Sigh.. Loved it. :) you're indeed a very talented writer.

Aw. So sweet!

You know, whenever I study with someone for math, it never turns out like this. Admittedly, I'm nowhere near as clever as Penny. And, Penny is very clever, as noted from her brief but well-written dialogue.

The way you balanced Percy's studiousness with his (I'm torn between using the word admiration or) crush on Penny was fun. He seemed very in-character, but still lovestruck.

That was very cute. The way you used the prompt through each scene was perfect. And I really liked how Penny was not nearly as aloof as Percy. She seemed to have a good sense of humour about his quirks. Percy's speech seemed a bit stilted at times, but you gave the readers a good reason for that. He actually reminded me of Sheldon from the television show 'The Big Bang Theory'! Do you ever wonder what happened to Percy and Penelope? Obviously not everyone marries their school sweetheart, but I still wonder. Nice job with an underappreciated minor character! ~Gina :)