Reviews For Catchphrase
Reviewer: Phoebe Silver
Date: 11/21/11 4:32
Chapter: Catchphrase

Sigh.. Loved it. :) you're indeed a very talented writer.

Reviewer: WeasleyTriplet
Date: 12/16/10 11:21
Chapter: Catchphrase

This was quite a good story! I love the way you characterized Percy. It was exactly as I imagined him in the books, and I also like the way you had Percy and Penny meet. It was cute in a nerdy way, very Percy. Hope this helped!

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 12/13/10 1:55
Chapter: Catchphrase

Aw. So sweet!

You know, whenever I study with someone for math, it never turns out like this. Admittedly, I'm nowhere near as clever as Penny. And, Penny is very clever, as noted from her brief but well-written dialogue.

The way you balanced Percy's studiousness with his (I'm torn between using the word admiration or) crush on Penny was fun. He seemed very in-character, but still lovestruck.

Reviewer: The_Real_Hermione
Date: 10/16/10 3:45
Chapter: Catchphrase

My first thought was excellent characterisation of Percy - you made him fit JK's Percy and yet put him in a nicer light than he was often seen in the books. In a way, I would have preferred it if the title was "What a coincidence" rather than "Catchphrase", but that's just my personal opinion.

But it was a great fic, definitely short and sweet :).

Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 10/13/10 16:43
Chapter: Catchphrase

That was very cute. The way you used the prompt through each scene was perfect. And I really liked how Penny was not nearly as aloof as Percy. She seemed to have a good sense of humour about his quirks. Percy's speech seemed a bit stilted at times, but you gave the readers a good reason for that. He actually reminded me of Sheldon from the television show 'The Big Bang Theory'! Do you ever wonder what happened to Percy and Penelope? Obviously not everyone marries their school sweetheart, but I still wonder. Nice job with an underappreciated minor character! ~Gina :)

Reviewer: littlewolf
Date: 10/13/10 13:29
Chapter: Catchphrase

fits percy well. very nice. =)

You must login (register) to review.
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.

We have stories and authors in this archive.


Choose Theme:
Not From Others by FloreatCastellum 6th-7th Years
She may not have been able to join Harry, Ron and Hermione, but Ginny refuses...
A Seer Named Rosemary Snape by PlutoLovegood 1st-2nd Years
In 2018 Neville and Harry deliver a Hogwarts acceptance letter to Rosemary Snape...
Gelido Dormitabis (An Icy Slumber) by Nagini Riddle 3rd-5th Years
A poetic look at the oppressive sleep of the Inferi within the icy cave.Written...
A Christmas Choice by coolh5000 3rd-5th Years
After working late one Christmas Eve and missing yet another day out with his...
Winter at the Castle by Oregonian 1st-2nd Years
The winter solstice, the shortest, harshest days of the year. Would you have...
A Passing Fancy by HalfASlug 1st-2nd Years
The Yule Ball is on the horizon and Neville knows only one girl that he wants...
Four Christmases by Squibstress 6th-7th Years
Minerva attempts to teach Severus Occlumency and perhaps something more.