Reviews For Broken
Reviewer: Midnight Storm
Date: 02/18/11 4:26
Chapter: Poem

Twenty-two words reduced me to tears.

You have left me speechless.

Author's Response: I'm very glad you liked it so much. :)
Megan :)

Reviewer: keara96
Date: 10/14/10 19:23
Chapter: Poem

It was short but very meaningful.
There was a lot of emotion put into a small amount of words.
Nice job, Megan!

Author's Response: Thanks! I think I do better with short poems. They ussually turn out more potent. And I can never seem to make the stanzas match in longer poems.Thankee for teh reveiw, Elizabeth. :D

Reviewer: massiebolckrox
Date: 10/14/10 17:41
Chapter: Poem

Quite awesome. I liked it, and I don't usually like poetry. Great job!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks for teh reveiw! :D

Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 10/12/10 12:43
Chapter: Poem

I think this is a good poem! I only wanted more. :) I particularly liked the imagery of 'landscapes guarded by nightmares' - that is very strong, very powerful, and very evocative. It's also very fitting given what we know happened in the books. Nice job conveying so much in so few words! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it so much! :)

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