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Reviewer: ThatHPFan
Date: 02/14/12 1:09
Chapter: Pain is Real

Wow, I love it. I liked the bit at Godric's Hollow with Albus and Gellert, but I'm really glad that you added the parts at the funeral with Severus, that really added feeling, and showed the bond between Albus and Severus.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: vanessaaweasley
Date: 03/16/11 19:27
Chapter: Pain is Real

loved it

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: feldagast
Date: 02/07/11 8:54
Chapter: Pain is Real

That was soo good loved it :)

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: Charles Sinclair
Date: 10/08/10 21:36
Chapter: Pain is Real

I was quite moved by this. Its really good. The characterizations seem apt, and the depiction of the funeral scene is just one of those views or 'flashbacks' (a pensieve moment?) that J K Rowling has just left missing from the book, so I was very interested to read another persons take on it. I feel like there are a lot of those moments, and I should love for you to fill some more of them in... The meeting in the garden between Draco and Theodore that she edited out for example.
Still a few small typos.
Ending very powerful.

I look forward to seeing more of your work.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Lost moments are very important to fanfiction-- there is just so much history in the world! I will be putting more in as time goes by. I am glad you enjoyed the story.

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