Beautiful. Absolutely, breathtakingly beautiful.
A very short yet emotional piece. I really love the way you described Sirius as if he was a '' broken shell '' that was devoid of any life. This quiet interaction between Sirius and Remus was very touching. Though it's a short piece, you definitely captured the entire mood of the story well.
Keep on writing !
Very sad, but not overemotional. Well-written and real. Could do with a bit more background throughout the story, but otherwise, good work.
Author's Response: Thankyou, glad you enjoyed :)