Wow, You are a really Good Writer; I really can't wait for the rest!!!
P.s:why don't you change the bit where it says soccer to football, I know its fussy-but sometimes little things like that make it much believable!! :)
Hi! Well done I really enjoyed this, to the point that I wish the chapters were longer. Please keep going!
it is a good start i think that we are going to read a promising story hope u do not take long in updating sam1 of ravenclaw
Looking good! I like the premise of the story. Keep up the good work.
I like the unusual premise of this story and how it shifts between Andrew and Beth. Can't wait for more.
thank you for a nice fic. may I suggest you to check your spelling and grammar before posting. Otherwise a very nice fic with a great plot and interesting characters.
please finish the story
it was a really good concept
hurry up... next chapter
This story really interests me, and I can't wait for the story to really pick up. Just one little nitpick, though...they wouldn't have just brought her into the next room to operate right then. They would have to wait for the next day or something. There's this whole thing where you can't have had anything to eat for about 8 hours or so before they put you under anesthesia, or I guess there could be negative side effects or something. It's a bad idea, anyway. I don't remember what the rule about liquids was. Sorry, but it just bothered me a little, and I know this because I had surgery not so long ago. I don't think it's the type of surgery that matters, but the anesthesia. Anyway, can't wait to see another update!
Your story is reaaaaalllllly good! I love the storyline and i can't wait for things to become 'magical'!!!!!
Keep writing, coz ill keep reading!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll probably have the next chapter up by next week. A sneak peek: we explore Andrew's running away.
Oh, cool! That's a really nice story, and it's finally up!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Does seem a bit odd! I didn't intend to get hooked, but here I am! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks! Your reviews really keep me going!