Reviews For Stars Apart
Reviewer: RobintheGryffindor
Date: 12/30/10 10:26
Chapter: Better than Revenge

Oh my gosh, this was amazing, but I want the old James back! This is one of my favorite stories on here! Ah! Please write more soon :D

Author's Response: i know, this version of james is annoying me, too :P HE'S STILL IN THERE I PROMISE!! the next chapter's in queue now, up soon! thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: beaternumber1
Date: 12/29/10 19:41
Chapter: Better than Revenge

Awe! Awesome chapter. :)
I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: lunar-eclipse
Date: 12/29/10 16:52
Chapter: Better than Revenge

I love this story, and Trickster. They are true literary magic. I cannot wait for more of this story, and more from this author as well.

Reviewer: loneronline
Date: 12/29/10 16:19
Chapter: Better than Revenge

Damn! Quit writing such amazing chapters! How am I supposed to get on with things if all I can think about is Lily's awesome seeker skills? Very cool.

Reviewer: unjellify
Date: 12/29/10 15:24
Chapter: Better than Revenge

Okay I've never written two reviews for a story, but I'll admit it, I love this one. The characters of James and Lily are both so well-done in this fic and I can only hope that I'm doing them as much justice. Update soon! (PS: fellow AVPM fan! Yay! xD)

Reviewer: RavenclawAspirant
Date: 12/29/10 15:13
Chapter: Better than Revenge

I really liked the idea of having her catch the snitch! the only thing i would suggest would be to put in something about what the teachers would do in response to this because it doesn't seem likely that they wouldn't notice bludgers in the great hall. Great story!

Author's Response: oh, no worries, they did ;) this was another one of those chapters that just got a little too long, so the next one picks up in exactly the same place. but thanks!!

Reviewer: unjellify
Date: 12/29/10 13:49
Chapter: Entropy

This is probably the best chapter of fan fiction I have ever read. (of course, I haven't read the rest of the story yet.) All the characters are so well-portrayed and I'm even forgetting that Leda isn't in canon. Awesome job!

Author's Response: oh thank you so much!!! also, i love your username. "i can't believe i couldn't figure out the countercurse was just 'unjellify'"

Reviewer: arwen85
Date: 12/29/10 13:47
Chapter: Better than Revenge

Absolutely loved this chapter!

Reviewer: Blue_Flower
Date: 12/29/10 12:54
Chapter: Better than Revenge

I have been watching this story all day for an update!! YAY! Thanks for another wonderful chapter, I'm looking forward to the next. I hope you have safe travels today (I think you said you would be traveling on Wednesday.)

Reviewer: Livvy Lemon
Date: 12/29/10 11:48
Chapter: Better than Revenge

This was a really good chapter.....the prank was a great idea. However, the impationent side of me really wants James and Lily to get together already. I miss the old James the one who was brave and funny, the one who once said tha he wouldn't give up on Lily. I find this new James rather annoying only becuase he wouln't make things right w/ his friends even though he knows that he screwed peter over, ditiched his best friend he will ever had for Leda of all people and snapped at Remus. Please bring the old James back!! I miss him dearly,
Livvy Lemon
PS despite the annoying James factor this was a really good chapter, well done again!!

Author's Response: yeah, tbh, he's annoying me, too. he's going through stuff. you may like the next chapter a little more, though ;)

Reviewer: Rene4hp
Date: 12/29/10 10:06
Chapter: Better than Revenge

Dear Maggie,
I love it! It was a good chapter. I have to say that the whole and Sirius really getting along thing makes the James and Leda thing not hurt so much. BUt, I do feel really bad for Sirius and Lily. But, I am Really curious at what is going to happen in the next chapter during the full moon. Even with the match! I hate to say this but I hope Slytherin wins the match. But, you know I would feel bad for James..Not Leda though (OF COURSE). I think overall you did an amazing job once again. The characters stayed in place. The emotions were as high as they can be! And the relationships are as intense as every! Cheers for doing such an amazing job Maggie! Cheers!
From the satisfied & Happy,
Rene Luna Smith!
After Note:Happy Christmas everyone and a Happy New Year!

Reviewer: chattyswimmer
Date: 12/29/10 9:20
Chapter: Better than Revenge

Yes! Loved this chapter. The prank was original, and I loved when Lily caught the snitch and met James (of course haha). Great job, can't wait for the next one!

Reviewer: Little Lion
Date: 12/27/10 19:38
Chapter: Frankly, My Dear

i was never a member of this website,i just read the stories without ever writing or commenting but this is the first story that i am reading as it is published. I dislike waiting for the next chapter to come out which is why i generally only read completed stories,however i loved your last story trickster. and i can never pass up reading a sequel. i love the last few chapters especially though i of course, cannot wait for Lily and James to get together. i like how the marauders are depicted and it is not just about James and Lily.

Reviewer: Hopes Mom
Date: 12/27/10 13:35
Chapter: Frankly, My Dear

Great new chapter - I didn't anticipate a fight between James andd Sirius. As usual I love your Sirius and hate Leda. I am glad that Mary has some empathy for Leda because I don't. I am really surprised that James doesn't feel bad about Peter - He is being rather selfish. Really, Leda isn't "not that bad" - ugh! I would not like to be described that way! Will we get to see the results of the wartcap powder? Thank you so much for writing! I hope you did well on your exams!

Reviewer: Rene4hp
Date: 12/26/10 15:24
Chapter: Frankly, My Dear

So, have been re reading this non stop and I just have to say that James Potter is an arse.

I feel bad for saying it but, he should know that Sirius would never do that to him. But, I hate to say this but, I am kinda happy about the pain that wormtail is feeling. He needs a little pain....but, then again lets hope it was't one of the reasons he fell to the dark lord......

then again James needs to get this Lazy arse up and forgive Lily...

"If a woman is partial to a man, and does not endeavour to conceal it, he must find it out.
Pride and Prejudice
Thank you Elizabeth Bennet! But, I must give Lily brownie points for doing that to Leda!

Reviewer: loneronline
Date: 12/23/10 21:16
Chapter: Frankly, My Dear

Wow! Congratulations on the great story - I'm super impressed by your writing skills, as well as your amazing characterisation! It's a very rare thing to have such believable characters in fan fictions. I particularly like Sirius; his humor is spot on!
Now I'll just have to wait patiently again for the next chapter... *sigh*

Author's Response: oh thanks! and the next one is coming soon, i promise! i'm also completely in love with sirius, so i'm glad you love him :)

Reviewer: HarryPotterGeek17
Date: 12/23/10 15:04
Chapter: Frankly, My Dear

Oh no! I just reviewed on your story and I didn't read over my review so if you read my review earlier I wrote "keep" instead of "stop". I'm so sorry. I didn't really mean to say that I didn't want to "keep" reading your stories:-(

Reviewer: HarryPotterGeek17
Date: 12/23/10 14:59
Chapter: Frankly, My Dear

OMG. I've recently read your series Trickster and I finished Stars apart in 2 days. I love your stories and I was going to review earlier, but I didn't want to keep reading your stories. I totally can't wait for the next chapter! Not to be pushy or anything but when is the next chapter gonna be up??? I know it's really hard to come up with new ideas but the suspense is killing me. Please write soon!

Author's Response: aww thanks! and it should be soon--you caught me at a slow patch, because of the holidays and everything, but i actually have this story completely outlined, along with most of the third one in this little trilogy, so as far as coming up with new ideas goes, no worries! i won't be writing myself into a corner with this one ;) and the next one should be up really soon....i have a transatlantic flight next week, so lots of time to write :D

Reviewer: beaternumber1
Date: 12/23/10 10:08
Chapter: Frankly, My Dear

I have read both of your Lily/James stories in less than a day and I am really impressed. You're a great writer, and I can't wait for the rest of this story! Update soon! :)

Author's Response: oh thanks! i'll have it up asap. probably not til after christmas, but asap :)

Reviewer: chattyswimmer
Date: 12/22/10 21:57
Chapter: Frankly, My Dear

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