Reviews For Stars Apart
Reviewer: wannabe Rita Skeeter
Date: 01/12/11 8:01
Chapter: Bare

Hi Willow! It was really good. The plot thickens Lily and James get a move one but, taking way to long! Sorry I hate to say it ,but it's the truth. The kiss moves things a lot faster ,but still.James needs to dump the tramp! I hope we can all agree that Leda is a tramp! Willow it is an amazing story ,but I feel like its taking forever (even though we all know the ending)

Reviewer: loneronline
Date: 01/11/11 18:12
Chapter: Bare

The thick plottens!

Author's Response: hahahahahha this made me laugh

Reviewer: JeeviS
Date: 01/11/11 17:54
Chapter: Bare

I love it!!!!!!!! cant wait for the next chapter! plz update soon...

Reviewer: RobintheGryffindor
Date: 01/11/11 17:45
Chapter: Bare

i hate you! youre to good a writer and now i want more of this story! its too amazing! do u have jk rowling helping you? haha well please write more soon! but i do have to admit, you have must faster updates then most other writers so i am thankful! thank you! :D

ps i luvedd james, he's back to somewhat himself!

Author's Response: I DID ACTUALLY MEET HER years ago. it was very exciting. she signed my copy of prisoner of azkaban. sadly, though, that's the only contact we've ever had :P SORRY YOU CAUGHT ME ON THE WEEK THAT I FAIL AND LIFE AND AM BEING SLOW AT UPDATING! the next chapter will be up really soon, thank you so much for reading! and YES! slowly but surely. james's is on his way back.

Reviewer: Livvy Lemon
Date: 01/11/11 16:04
Chapter: Bare

You captured a great feeling of bittersweet i really enjoyed this chapter. I'm glad everbody is on the road to recovery. The way you described James' house was actully how i imagined it.......Leda is such a witch (and we all know what that rythms with) thanks so much great chapter

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 01/11/11 14:19
Chapter: Bare

awwww kind of sad yet sweet. i cant wait for the next chapter to see what james got. leda's prank though mean was funny :) thanx for your fast update cant wait for the nexy chapter :D

Reviewer: Rene4hp
Date: 01/11/11 14:15
Chapter: Bare

Dear Maggie,
What a chapter! I have to say one of my favorites!!!! Any way once again you did an amazing job! But, please end the Leda thing, it made me cry even more! (not as much as Lily and James thing!)
Once again I love it and it was amazing! Cheers.
From the super happy & crying
Rene Luna Smith
After Note: Update Soon!

Reviewer: Darcy HP
Date: 01/11/11 13:33
Chapter: Bare

really good! i love the easy friendship between sirius and lily. i'm dying for the next chapter!!

Reviewer: beaternumber1
Date: 01/11/11 13:33
Chapter: Bare

Awe! This chapter was awesome. :P I love that Sirius and James are finally getting more friendly and the ending was awesome! :)
Yay James.

Reviewer: k4c
Date: 01/11/11 12:54
Chapter: Bare

Oh that last part between James and Lily was so romantic yet so heartbreaking.

Clearly he still has feelings for her if he thought "What the hell" when she said he was dreaming!

Love it...update soon hehe

Reviewer: fairy_lights27
Date: 01/11/11 12:41
Chapter: Bare

OMG I love this story sooo much!! PLEASE update as soon as you can!

Reviewer: Blue_Flower
Date: 01/11/11 11:46
Chapter: Bare

Awe! Loved the ending! I can't wait to find out what she gave James!

Reviewer: little_em
Date: 01/10/11 8:56
Chapter: Subterfuge

I cannot wait for the next chapter! Absolutely love this story. One of the best!

Author's Response: thank you so much! glad you like it :)

Reviewer: Meza
Date: 01/09/11 21:38
Chapter: Way Back Home

Love this story! It's been a long time since I've read one that has made me excited about fan fic like yours, keep them coming!! You've got some serious (or Sirius) talent going on!

Author's Response: oh, wow, god, thank you so much!! i just put the next chapter in queue, actually, so it should be up soon :D

Reviewer: HarryPotterGeek17
Date: 01/09/11 9:17
Chapter: Subterfuge

can't wait till the next chapter!

Author's Response: in queue now! :D

Reviewer: Scout_1611
Date: 01/07/11 8:25
Chapter: Way Back Home

oh, and thanks for updating regularly; it is much apprediated x

Author's Response: haha thanks :) i love writing it, which definitely helps!

Reviewer: RebeccaBlack
Date: 01/07/11 1:22
Chapter: Subterfuge

Oh my gaaaaaaaad! I'm addicted to this. PLEASE update soon, I can't find any other Lily/James fics that don't completely mangle the characters or the English language.
Love it!

Author's Response: oh thank you so much :D i'm glad you like it! the next chapter's in queue now, so it shouldn't be too long a wait.

Reviewer: Hopes Mom
Date: 01/05/11 18:25
Chapter: Subterfuge

Hooray - I can love James again! He's back to himself and didn't abandon Remus at the full moon.

I read this chapter and laughed out loud (with Sirius) at Peter's "condition." Thanks for a great new chapter!

Reviewer: Rene4hp
Date: 01/05/11 17:12
Chapter: Subterfuge

So Maggie I have a question can we put Leda on Voldemorts Killing People List. If he can't kill her I'm sure that one of the Death Eaters would not mind. I mean how busy can they be. You know what if anything we can put her on the "If we are bored and have no one else to kill List" I think every one would not mind. I mean Sirius would throw a party.See a positive in every negative:).Hahaha just Kidding......(not really;)... I am just saying it would make everyone else's life a lot better! It would speed things up!
From the joking&thinking
Rene Luna Smith.
After Note: I hope everyone knows I am joking:)

Reviewer: kivey
Date: 01/05/11 15:53
Chapter: Subterfuge


Author's Response: done and done! next chapter's in queue now :D

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