Reviews For Stars Apart
Reviewer: StarBolt7
Date: 01/21/11 15:13
Chapter: Bare

I love this story. it is my favourite one out of everything I've read. update soon, it's amazinn (: btw, I love Sirius in this story. you're doing an incredible job.!!

Author's Response: ohh thanks so much! and i love sirius, he is fun to write :D

Reviewer: pheonix tear
Date: 01/21/11 11:09
Chapter: Bare

WOW! I love this series! I cant wait for the next chapter to be put up!

Author's Response: thanks! it's in queue now, actually!

Reviewer: Fearthainn
Date: 01/20/11 10:37
Chapter: Bare

I am in love. When are you putting the next chapeter up.

Author's Response: within the week! i was moving, which is why i've been so slow :P

Reviewer: Fearthainn
Date: 01/20/11 10:36
Chapter: Bare

I am in love. When are you putting the next chapeter up.

Author's Response: ahahaha thanks :) i just put it in queue, actually, so any day!

Reviewer: harrypotterandsoccer
Date: 01/20/11 10:14
Chapter: Bare

I love your writing! Do you know when chapter 13 will be up? I really want to know what's going to happen! :]


Author's Response: haha thanks :) it should be within the next few days!!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 01/19/11 9:28
Chapter: Bare

Interesting chapter! I cannot wait to see what happens on Christmas Day in the next chapter :-)

Author's Response: hehe thanks :) it's in queue now, so it should be up soon!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 01/19/11 9:21
Chapter: Subterfuge

Oooo This is going to be so exciting! Awesome idea to bring Lily along ;-)

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 01/19/11 9:12
Chapter: Better than Revenge

Interesting idea with the bludgers in the Great Hall...Wonderfully exciting chapter :-)

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 01/19/11 9:04
Chapter: Frankly, My Dear

So my favorite character for this chapter is def. Sirius!! Great job with this chapter. I really get captivated while reading each one

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 01/19/11 8:54
Chapter: Sad Songs

Clever costumes! A wolf in sheep's clothing was a awesome idea, and poor Peter being called a mouse all the time ;-) Terrific chapter!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 01/19/11 8:47
Chapter: Entropy

Lovely chapter! Nice to see Lily get a little wake up call :-)

Reviewer: readergirl166
Date: 01/17/11 12:29
Chapter: Bare


Author's Response: thank you!

Reviewer: Little Lion
Date: 01/16/11 16:59
Chapter: Bare

i really love the ending and i can't wait to see if james realizes that it wasn't a dream or if leda finds out and if this will make them finally get together. though he didn't mean it is very cruel to lily to kiss her with the feeling she has for him, that she can't act on because now she knows he feels the same way.

Author's Response: ...heh heh. well, i can't really say anything. but you'll find out soon! :)

Reviewer: Rene4hp
Date: 01/16/11 16:52
Chapter: Bare

Dear Maggie,
Yes life can be a little hectic at times but I have one question that I think everyone wants to hear "When will the next chapter be up or even put in check?"
From the waiting& waiting even more
Rene Luna Smith

Author's Response: in queue now!

Reviewer: I hate Tuney
Date: 01/15/11 16:45
Chapter: Bare

oh my Goood!!!
I felt like crying in the end!!!
Will there be more things in the next chapter about the whole situation?? I mean,you know, will the stars stop being apart any more??
you're fabulus!! keep going!!!

Author's Response: of course they'll be more! i mean, no spoilers here or anything, but this is definitely not just a random occurrence ;)

Reviewer: siriuslypotter
Date: 01/13/11 20:45
Chapter: Bare

Ahh!! Another great chapter :D
I've been following this story for a few months now (how could I not read the sequel to the amazing "Trickster"? Lol) and I just have to say that you are a great writer and keep it up! I made an account for this website just to review your story! Hope the next part is up soon :)


Author's Response: awwwwww thanks so much! i'm really flattered :) the next chapter should be up soon!

Reviewer: seagull56
Date: 01/13/11 19:34
Chapter: Bare

Ohhh cool :) love that you update so fast, the story is great!

Author's Response: haha, the one week that i'm slow on my updates :P but thanks so much, the next chapter should be up within the week!

Reviewer: Rene4hp
Date: 01/13/11 18:35
Chapter: Bare

So, every time I read this chapter I look under options hoping and waiting and wanting the four blue words to be there NEXT. I wonder when they will appear...I hope soon! So , I thought I should put some of my favorite quotes from this chapter

Lily sighed. “Well…um…someone came in here while I was showering and stole all my clothes.”

She said this last part in such a rush that Sirius wasn’t entirely sure he had heard her correctly. “Excuse me?” he said. “Did you just say someone stole all your clothes?”
Really,” Sirius said, walking towards him.

“It’s actually a catfight. Very interesting. Highly entertaining. I’ll explain once we get out of the open.”

When they reached the bathroom, Sirius rapped on the door. “Open up, Evans!” he called.

“Took you long enough,” Lily grumbled, and the door creaked open a crack. A moment later, she stuck her hand out.

“Oh, you want to come out?” Sirius said mischievously, and he grabbed her hand and pulled.

Lily yelped, ripping her hand away just in time and slamming the bathroom door shut again. “Not funny!” she said emphatically.

Sirius smirked. “A little funny,” he said. “Here. For real this time.”

Lily stuck her hand out of the door again, and he shoved the bundle of clothes into it. From behind the closed door, they heard her laugh as she looked at what they had brought her.

“You’re such a guy!” she called. “‘World’s Best Grandma?’”

“You’re welcome,” Sirius said back.

“Thank you,” came the muffled reply. “Hold on, I’ll be right out.”

James leaned back against the wall, chuckling, and Sirius grinned at him, a warmth between them that had been missing for months. A few seconds later, Lily came bouncing out of the bathroom saying, “Remind me to never go anywhere without my wand aga—”
She stopped, look suddenly self-conscious as she noticed that James was standing beside Sirius. “Oh,” she said, looking down, “hey.”

Lily?” he murmured, his hand tightening around her wrist. “What’re you…am I dreaming?”

“Yeah,” she said after a moment’s hesitation, kneeling beside him, her arm slipping from his grasp. “Yeah, it’s just a dream.”

“Thought so,” he said sleepily, propped up on his elbow but barely able to keep his eyes open. “Wouldn’t make sense otherwise. But…since it’s a dream, and all…”

And before she had even fully registered what he was saying, he had moved the hand that had been holding her wrist to the side of her face, leaned forward, and brushed his lips lightly against hers—so lightly, in fact, that for the first few moments, she wondered if she was imagining it.

But then just as soon as he had been there, he was gone again, breaking all contact between them and settling back into his pillow. Lily, still slightly bewildered by what had just happened, got shakily to her feet, and brushed her thumb against his cheekbone. “Good night, James,” she whispered. “Go back to sleep.”

“Mkay,” he sighed, yawning slightly, and nestling deeper into bedcovers. With one backwards glance, Lily crossed the room and darted outside again, closing the door softly behind her, feeling open and vulnerable and wondering why, suddenly, she felt a bit like crying.

So.. you all are going to think that I am bonkers but, when I read the last quote I was yelling at my computer saying"NO JAMES IT'S NOT A DREAM WAKE UP!! IT'S NOT A DREAM!!"
Then I started to say
Of course I meant when he is not dreaming...Then I started to cry...Yes well I am sorry of you find me mad but in the words of Alice Kingsley's Father " The craziest people are the best people."
And crazy as in not mentally disorder person like Voldemort and Leda their just crazy ,mind you not the good crazy!
From the crazy & sorrowful
Rene Luna Smith
After Note: Sorry if you find me mad but, to tell you the truth I am

Reviewer: willowy-lily tree
Date: 01/12/11 16:50
Chapter: Bare

So good, can't wait to read what happens next =)

Author's Response: aww thanks :) the next chapter should be up any day!

Reviewer: Blue_Flower
Date: 01/12/11 15:30
Chapter: Bare

The more times I read this chapter the more I love it! The ending gets me everytime. I just cannot wait to read more!

Author's Response: next chapter's in queue now! thanks for reading/reviewing/enjoying :D always makes me happy

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