Reviews For Stars Apart
Reviewer: bee13
Date: 02/13/11 16:53
Chapter: Beautiful Disaster

Love it.
Love it all.

Have Lily and James make up and make out? Please?

Author's Response: ......:)

Reviewer: StarsApartlover
Date: 02/12/11 21:32
Chapter: Way Back Home

Hello Maggie,
I was wondering when the next chapter would be up? I know you are VERY busy but could you update this soon so it can be a valentines present? Please? I check this website every day two rimes a day to see if your chapters come up! I do get emails to tell me but I still hope that they are wrong so I check it would be really great if the next chapter could come up! Thanks

Reviewer: I hate Tuney
Date: 02/12/11 8:00
Chapter: Beautiful Disaster

Willow?? Is everything ok???

We,your fans-or admirers,choose whatever you like ;)-can't wait for the next chapter to come!! I'm sure it will be wonderful as always :)))
Take care :)

Author's Response: hey, yeah, the next chapter is about 3/4 of the way done...sorry it's taking so long, but real life has to come first sometimes :/ should be soon!

Reviewer: rita skeeter 101
Date: 02/10/11 13:53
Chapter: Bare

Sorry about that little mistake from before.
Dear Willow,
Sorry but its taking too long to post the chapterS.I hope all is well at home!

Reviewer: rita skeeter 101
Date: 02/10/11 13:51
Chapter: Beautiful Disaster

Dear Willow,

Reviewer: Rene4hp
Date: 02/06/11 6:26
Chapter: Beautiful Disaster

When is the next chapter going up?

Reviewer: StarsApartlover
Date: 02/05/11 21:26
Chapter: Way Back Home

Quick question... Is Leda Wood Oliver woods mother? I was rereading trickster and I thought that maybe Leda was oliver's mother? Thx :3)

Author's Response: nah, Wood's her maiden name, if she gets married....she does have a brother though ;)

Reviewer: Blinkdawg
Date: 02/04/11 21:30
Chapter: Beautiful Disaster

I loved the first story. The sequels even better! I HAVE to ask when you're going to make the 3rd. If you are.......And i think you should,alot of things seem.....left unanswered in this story.

Author's Response: oh, well this one's actually not done yet. the next chapter should be up soon :)

Reviewer: StarsApartlover
Date: 02/03/11 17:30
Chapter: Way Back Home

Can't wait for the next chapter! :3)

Reviewer: Lye Everest
Date: 01/30/11 20:47
Chapter: Way Back Home

Okay so I started Trickster one night last week around eleven-twelve. I finished Trickster hours later way-too-early in the morning(3 I presume?). Then I promptly began Stars Apart, but forced myself to sleep. The next day of school all I could think about was this story. Once I got home and finished all you had written of Stars Apart, all I could do was hope you would soon update. You did, and I've now finished Beautiful Disaster, and let me just say that your writing is some of the best I have read in my life! I love how you make everything realistic and cease to surprise me every chapter. It makes me sad to think about Lily and James' future, but reading these stories makes me happy. I have no trouble thinking that if J.K. Rowling wrote James and Lily's story it would resemble these. I highly doubt I will EVER read a fanfiction as good as these ever again (unless of course you write moreXD).

So now I'll awkwardly end this by saying that you are (I'm being completely honest) a VERY talented author and I can't wait to read more of Stars Apart.

Reviewer: hermioneweasley19
Date: 01/30/11 20:13
Chapter: Beautiful Disaster

I started reading this yesterday, and I stopped reading it around chapter 11 (so I could sleep!), and I was wondering how you'd end Leda&James's relationship. I really like the way you did it, seeing as it ended the relationship while semi-mending James's relationships with his friends & Lily. Now for the story in general... I loved Trickster, and Stars Apart is even better. It's so addicting to read!! Please update soon!

Reviewer: Rene4hp
Date: 01/30/11 6:19
Chapter: Beautiful Disaster

So, I was rereading this and you have no idea how happy this chapter makes me. I can't stop laughing when I read it. Well done Maggie!
From laughing &smiling.
Rene Luna Smith

Reviewer: siriuslypotter
Date: 01/29/11 23:03
Chapter: Beautiful Disaster

Lol, bunny slippers & pj's vs. elegant gown gettup - no competition indeed!! Haha, I loved that part :) Ahh, I cannot wait till the next chapter! Some things I really enjoyed were the Lily/Sirius friendship you portray, its so funny and cute, hehe. Also the fact that Leda has FINALLY gone...I think everyone is relieved by that, lol. And I hope in the next chapter Lily and James finally have an actual conversation!! You are such a great writer, keep up the good work!

-Gina :{D

Reviewer: RavenclawAspirant
Date: 01/29/11 17:00
Chapter: Beautiful Disaster

Great chapter! please update soon!

Reviewer: Hopes Mom
Date: 01/29/11 14:23
Chapter: Beautiful Disaster

I am curious about the chapter title? I am sooo happy that Leda is gone and James chose his friends over her - always! The bunny slippers were a really funny detail. Thank you for an awesome new chapter!

Author's Response: oh, it's a song! a lot of my chapter titles are, actually :) and thank you!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 01/28/11 6:06
Chapter: Beautiful Disaster

Terrific chapter! Nice to see Leda out of the picture :-) Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: StarBolt7
Date: 01/27/11 20:14
Chapter: Beautiful Disaster

I love this. Leda finally got told. I've been waiting for that !!!
I thought this chapter was really good. I've always loved your writing style. I've been looking forward to this chapter since I read the last one. This story is amazing. Keep it up !!

Reviewer: Little Lion
Date: 01/27/11 18:16
Chapter: Beautiful Disaster

so I saw this was up at about midnight last night and really should have been sleeping because I was supposed to have a midterm this morning (thank goodness for the snow day!!!) but of course I had to read it. I loved it! I really like the characterization of Lily and the friendship between Lily and Sirius. I really hope that Lily and James get back on the right track now. I also liked Remus' realization at the end about Peter. When I am reading your story I feel like I am reading a real book not an amateur work of fiction. I am anxiously anticipating the next chapter but i am hoping it will go uphill from here.

Reviewer: RobintheGryffindor
Date: 01/27/11 14:30
Chapter: Beautiful Disaster

Too amazing for words, I'm so happy Leda is gone I hated her!! Update fast!!!!! :) oh and what happened with the snitch?

Reviewer: rita skeeter 101
Date: 01/27/11 13:27
Chapter: Beautiful Disaster

Dear Maggie,
Yes it is the same Rita Skeeter from the last time. But, I forgot my pasword and yeah well I made a new account.So, I like the whole feeling of the friendship coming back togethor.It really made Christmas special for them. I also like the bunny slippers and the pjs. It was cute. Leda urghh no use crying over spilled butterbeer. The fact that James mum was happy that they broke up made my day .BUT, yes their is always a but in my review.They better get the hell on with!!!IT IS TAKING TOOOO LOONNNGGG!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE post soon and get them togethor because it will get fustrating and people will cry because it is taking to long. Question how long will this book be? Okay well chat to you soon!!!!

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