Reviews For Stars Apart
Reviewer: siriuslypotter
Date: 04/09/11 13:37
Chapter: The Most Real Things

Great chapter! :) Love love loved it.
Totally worth the wait. And yess StarsApartlover, I knoww. I do have a life, haha. I was just anxious for the next chapter! But seriously, you did a fantabulous job Willow :)

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 04/09/11 9:43
Chapter: The Most Real Things

i'm so happy u updated...i thought u had given up. great chapter!

Author's Response: no! never! just really busy :P but i'm not gonna quit on this story or anything. thanks, glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Rene4hp
Date: 04/09/11 7:36
Chapter: The Most Real Things

AHHHHHH!!!!THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!! *tone is screaming for happiness*
Dear Maggie,
You have done it again! You WOWED us all. This was by far the best chapters that you have written. Not only because of what happened ,but because of how you wrote it. It was just amazing. You also put a lot into one chapter. You involved a battle and our romance part of the novel. While I was reading the love part a small grin started on my face, then as I continued to read the grin just keep on getting bigger and bigger!!!! On of my favorite parts was with James Lily and Sirius.My favorite quotes are

“I’m in love with you,” she said, her eyes wide and open, “completely and desperately. Only you. I know…this doesn’t make sense, with everything that’s happened, but it’s true. I should have said something before, I know I should have, but being with you, it would change things, and I was scared. So I kept waiting and waiting but after today I realized that the only thing I’m really scared of is losing you. So I just…I had to tell you.”
AND
Lily and James were both momentarily speechless, but Sirius unfolded his arms and said jauntily, “Hiya, sir!”

“Mr. Black,” Dumbledore said, inclining his head at Sirius, and Lily thought she saw him wink. “I see you found our missing Head Boy and Girl.”
“Oh, yeah,” Sirius said breezily. “I sniffed them out eventually.”
I realized as well as we get a glimsp of our horrible little rat of a friend Peter. He was hiding in someones poket! He might as well get a huge blinking light on his back saying COWARD!
But, think about it this isn't the last battle that Lily and James will fight in. So, I thought why not some famous words by Taylor Swift!
"I said remember this moment
In the back of my mind
The time we stood with our shaking hands
The crowds in stands went wild
We were the kings and the queens
And they read off our names
The night you danced like you knew our lives would never be the same
You held your head like a hero on a history book page
It was the end of a decade
But the start of an age
Long live the walls we crashed through
How the kingdom lights shined just for me and you
I was screaming long live all the magic we made
And bring on all the pretenders
One day we will be remembered"
Thank you so much for posting. Once again you have done an amazing job!

From the super happy& super thankful,
R.L.S
Rene Luna Smith

Reviewer: grangergirl35
Date: 04/08/11 23:18
Chapter: The Most Real Things

If u take that long to update again I'll b very upset :)

Author's Response: haha i'm sorry...i know this next one was long too...but the school year's over so i can update regularly again, and the next one is in queue!

Reviewer: StarsApartlover
Date: 04/08/11 21:50
Chapter: The Most Real Things

Take ur time in life we can wait even though we would love chapters :) everyone has a life yes including u siriuslypotter!

Reviewer: Little Lion
Date: 04/08/11 20:12
Chapter: Way Back Home

i LOVED the new chapter! and the way that you had them get together. anxiously awaiting the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: wauwabee
Date: 04/08/11 17:01
Chapter: The Most Real Things

This chapter was well worth the wait! I loved the bit where Lily and James are on the bed talking together. It was very sweet. Post when you can!

Reviewer: Callisto Anaxandra
Date: 04/08/11 16:51
Chapter: The Most Real Things

I am so happy right now. Thank you for finally resolving their romantic tension. While I thought it was quite trying to wait so long, I think the build up has improved the epic-ness of success. I was sad to see that you have James fearing Voldemort's name, but I suppose it makes him more realistic than Mr. Brave Gryffindor that he normally is fanfics. Are you hinting that Peter was already reporting to Voldemort? I had thought it was later on, after Hogwarts. Anyway, keep updating!! :)

Author's Response: haha i think he'll get used to it eventually ;) he's still brave! just human. and nah peter's not doing it don't worry. but i think maybe it's the first time he's starting to realize that somebody could. thanks so much for reading/waiting!!

Reviewer: StarsApartlover
Date: 04/08/11 12:59
Chapter: Way Back Home

Please when is the next chapter coming? I know it's in quea but pleasssssse when? Btw did u know that j.k. Rowling is coming out with a lily and James story in 2014?

Reviewer: siriuslypotter
Date: 04/06/11 16:46
Chapter: Gravity

WHY DOES QUEUE TAKE SO LONG, aahhhhh. Sorry. Lol. I should probably go do something productive with my life now... :( haha

Reviewer: icanhazpotter
Date: 04/06/11 1:49
Chapter: Gravity

love it! when is the next chapter being uploaded? can't wait.

Reviewer: kivey
Date: 04/03/11 19:01
Chapter: Gravity

Alright I think I have waited a sutable amount of time before demanding the next chapter, I understand how stressful life can get but I have been checking for updates daily, unfortuantly that is not and exageration. More Please.

Author's Response: haha no you did good. i actually put it in queue yesterday!

Reviewer: Rene4hp
Date: 04/03/11 5:52
Chapter: Gravity

Yay! its in queue now!
R.L.S
Rene Luna Smith:)

Reviewer: Rene4hp
Date: 04/02/11 8:19
Chapter: Gravity

Dear Maggie,
I was jumping and smiling when I saw that you had responded to my review. I was so relieved and happy. I feel bad for my other comment though. :( I wished life wasn't so hectic. I know what you mean by it. :). Anyway, I cant wait for the next chapter. Thank you soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much for those responses to the reviews i think ALL of your fans appreciated them.
From the happy & gay (meaning merry)
R.L.S
Rene Luna Smith

Reviewer: Little Lion
Date: 03/31/11 19:03
Chapter: Way Back Home

You made my day with the comments that the next chapter will be up soon! i'm sooo excited!

Author's Response: it's in queue now! thanks for waiting :)

Reviewer: Blue_Flower
Date: 03/31/11 0:30
Chapter: Gravity

I am so happy to read your latest response to someone's comment. I check this story at least twice a day to see if it's been updated. I know real life takes priority! Thank you so much for continuing to work on this beautiful story! I'm really looking forward to your next chapter!

Author's Response: oh, i definitely won't stop til it's done, and in a few weeks all my real-life craziness will be over, so i will be back to more regular updates...this next one should be out within the week though! thanks so much for sticking with it :)

Reviewer: siriuslypotter
Date: 03/30/11 19:54
Chapter: Gravity

You can't leave us on a cliff hanger this long! Lol, just kidding. I understand you have a life. Sadly, I do not :( haha

Author's Response: i know i know i know i know, i'm sorry!!! i for what it's worth, i feel terrible. life is crazy. but i AM working on it, and it should be up soon :)

Reviewer: Little Lion
Date: 03/27/11 19:53
Chapter: Way Back Home

i love how you made them get together in a moment of uncertainty guided by emotions rather than the reason that seems to be holding Lily back. i love this story and you are a superb writer and i am anxiously awaiting the new chapter! keep up the good work!

Reviewer: icanhazpotter
Date: 03/24/11 22:25
Chapter: Gravity

please! when is the next chapter coming!

Author's Response: as soon as i can finish it--i'm almost done though, i promise! should be within a few days :)

Reviewer: Livvy Lemon
Date: 03/23/11 16:01
Chapter: Way Back Home

I agree. Your stories are great-the best fanfic i've read. I don't want to speak for anybody else but i get the feeling that alot of us fell head over heels for trickster and have been freaks about stars apart aswell. Im disapointed with how infrequent your updates have been for the past month or so. I know life needs to come first your 100% right, But you have a lot of fans who look forward to each new chapeter and response to a review. With a great pen like yours their comes great respresponsibility.

Author's Response: i know, i know i've been way behind :/ but i'm almost done with the next chapter, so it should be up soon, i promise!!

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