This was a GREAT chapter! I was literally laughing out loud for all of when they were fighting.
Another great chapter can't wait to see what else you come up with.
I love this story. I thought that it was Leda the whole time. I was partially right.
Author's Response: it almost was, originally! but i don't like her enough to let her do that ;) thanks!
You have a great gift for writing humour, so many things you write cause me to literally laugh out loud, World's Best Grandma...in Trickster Peter talking about his mother's self-help books and then holding James's hand later...how DO you think of these things?
Author's Response: awww, thanks! honestly, though, i never really plan it...the great thing about these characters is that they tend to write themselves :)
i loved the chapter! it was an absolutely adorable date!!!! but it can't always be happy i guess =( Keep up the good work!!and i can't wait for the next chapter!
Yet again, you don't disappoint me. I LOVE this story! And I ADORE the way the date went between James & Lily! But what happened at the end? I need to know! Please update soon!!!
Author's Response: awww, thanks :) it should be in queue tomorrow!
You have to hurry!!!!! I am dying here if you don't write quickly I'll stop reading! But this is a fantabulous story (as is the first one) great job and keep writing!
Author's Response: haha i should be putting it in queue tomorrow! hopefully not a long wait from there.
Over-all this was a wonderful chapter, but I do have a few critique points to make. In the beginning of this chapter Sirius used the word "sassy". Although I adore that word and love that you used it, sassy is not a British word. Something my beta, who is from England, told me when I once used it. She had no idea what that word meant. The word "Cheeky" would fit much better with this. Also when James say's "No, Professor Trelawney" I just wanted to remind you that Trelawney was not teaching at Hogwarts when James and Lily were at Hogwarts. I think in the fifth book she said she had been teaching fourteen years. So that would have put her at Hogwarts after Harry was already born. Just thought I would put that out there. Over-all though this was a solid chapter and the date was way cute. Cheers!
Author's Response: Oh, good catch--fixed it, thanks!
I ador this work so far, you have a great writing style superior to most of the others I've read here, the romance is done brilliantly! I haven't read your other work but I certainly will now! This is my first review as I'm relatively new to fan fiction and I thought your work deserved the first comment! Thanks for writing such great stories! nearly as good as j.k.!!!
That was a great chapter. Bad cliff hanger but good chapter. Can't wait to see the next one.
I think this is the kind of date all girls would like to experience!
Author's Response: :D ....just saying
Oh no! Stupid ropes :O Such a good chapter, you write the most adorable James :)
This was a very sweet chapter :) I loved the cliffhanger and I can't wait to read more!
Awww :) James is such a sweetie, haha.
Great chapter, can't wait for the next!
WOW! cliff hanger...really cute date haha i wish i could sneak into Hogsmeade. Leda and Annebelle are up to somthing bad i just know it!! cant wait for the next chapter
Absolutely perfect, I've been waiting for that chapter forever!
Please keep posting the chapters up asap :)
Aww :) great chapter! Can't wait for the next update!
Oh no! Wonderful chapter as always. Loved the candy part! :3)
Oh wow...Killing me there at the end! Such a cute and fun date for James to plan out :-) Loved it!