Reviewer: tc100292
Date: 09/21/10 19:40
Chapter: Chapter 1

aaaah so it was YOU who was the unnamed author at lily james fest!!
i loved this piece!
like, love love loved, it.
you have once again managed to write a perfectly wonderfully amazing lily james war era one shot. you are brilliant!
it earns a spot in my top three first war one shots (the other two spots are occupied by 'one miracle' and 'i could never climb alone')
im just so excited that this is you!
a WONDERFUL piece of work, congratulations is most definitely in order, i saw that many many people loved it also :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! It's much harder to write about the first war than to write about the Marauders in school, imo, but I've really started to love writing first war fics. I was a little nervous about this one, so I'm so happy it was well received in the fest :)

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 09/21/10 15:44
Chapter: Chapter 1

i love it so far. i like the transition we see in  james and lily and i like how its during the war and not while they are at school. its different a change but a good change. cant wait for the second part. and i love the first part where they are fixing their house its really cute and lighter to the other parts

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you can see something of a transition -- you'll definitely see more of that in the second part, which should be up within the next few days! I'm glad you liked this, and that you liked that first scene -- I think it's one of my favourites :)

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 09/21/10 14:04
Chapter: Chapter 1

Love it!

Author's Response: :)

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