You should do a follow-up! Goyle and his cronies got away and I'd like another story, but whatever, it was excellent regardless.
Author's Response: Thanks for the reviews.
All of my stories are inter-related, the timeline is on my author page. Goyle will be captured, eventually (I could tell you the date). But that story remains unwritten. I'm glad you enjoyed these tales an I hope you like my other stuff.-N-
Sweet, it was sad to read though.
Author's Response: Thanks. You might want to read Fred and George's Busy Day, too. -N-
I see who wears the robe in this family, Narcissa is just as horrible as the rest of them but she made very good points. Good chapter, nothing to report.
Author's Response: As I read DH I became convinced that the balance of power was shifting. Lucius was effectively emasculated by Voldemort. Draco has never had any courage, merely people prepared to back him up. -N-
Oh, please! Millicent you horrible, rotten little...anyway, good chapter and very twisted POV, which I liiked.
Author's Response: Thanks. Millicent may be horrible and rotten, but she certainly isn't little. Millicent makes appearances in some of my other stories. -N-
I love you Neville! His POV is very straightforward and informative and i really enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Thanks. Anyone who doesn't love Neville is extremely suspect, in my opinion. Neville is very straightforward, too, don't you think? -N-
Ha! Buckbeaks POV! Excellently done and very well written.
Author's Response: Thanks. -N-
Ha! Buckbeaks POV! Excellently done and very well written.
Author's Response: This is my "mistake" chapter :-(
In DH, Macnair is seen alive after this (he's in the Great Hall). I'm not going to delete the chapter.(/br>-N-
He can't blame Harry for doing what he had to do! lol. Anyway, nothing to report, so I shall keep reading.
Author's Response: Why not? People blame Harry for almost everything. :-D -N-
I sort of had a fanfiction in my mind about this, about why Fred asked Angie out in the first place. You read my mind! Anyway, well done.
Author's Response: Thanks. What alway puzzled me was the complete lack of any mention of their Yule Ball date the following year, when Angelina was their Quidditch Captain. That's what spured me to write this. -N-
Simple, doesn't always mean boring or dumb. But his blunt way of looking at things made this fast to read and I appreciate that.
Author's Response: Terry is another character who reappears in my other stories. This chapter defined his character for me. -N-
Good twist at the end, great POV
Author's Response: Thanks, until I wrote this I'd never liked Michael. -N-
Ugh, that jerk...the only thing I can say is that you didn't include that Harry, Ron, Hermione and Percy were with Fred, unless this POV happened afterwards. That's the only thing i can say, but its probably me just being a silly fangirl.
Author's Response: Thanks.
This happened after. I tried to make that clear in Abbott Ails, Bad Faith, and this chapter. They put Fred's body in an alcove. Percy left to tell the family, Harry, Ron and Hermione went to try to finish the battle. They had rescued Draco and Goyle but left them unconscious in the corridor. I wrote a timeline for the battle based on canon before I started these tales. I made one mistake.-N-
Nothing negative to say, only that Draco is a damned fat git.
Author's Response: Thanks.
This is the 200th review of these stories ("cheers!") - and it goes to Draco?He's a git, but he's lucky.
-N-
Seamus worries alot! Once again, great meshing, nothing to report.
Author's Response: Thanks again. -N-
She dies in the movie but I always hoped that she made it in the books, it was bothering me for a while, so I like this. Didn't like her bitchy attitude though, but Lavender is like that, so what can you do?
Author's Response: Thanks. I've grown rather fond of Lavender. She's a silly girl, but brave and willing to fight for waht's right. She was last seen "feebly stirring" in the books. I give Lavender a lot of greif in my other stories, too. -N-
Nothing to report, just said that Colin actually died. Sad part in the book. Anyway, great meshing with the POV's, i have nothing to report.
Author's Response: Thanks again. Colin's death is a theme running through these tales. -N-
Damn Goyle! Ugh, that nearly made me sick, the bastard. Anyway, good chapter. Nothing negative to say.
Author's Response: Thanks. I suspect that you'll be saying that again very soon, sorry. -N-
Ernie sounds like a snob...but anyway, good chapter and I love how you blended everything in so nicely. Your POV's are great.
Author's Response: Thanks again. Harry always thought that Ernie was pompous. I tried to make him flawed, but basically decent. -N-
Nothing to report, I was curious as to what happened to her in the books, but, once again, this makes me feel better. Go kids!
Author's Response: Thanks. Susan, too, is one of the characters who will reappear in my stories. -N-
Very endearing, I really loved it. I was sort of worried for her in the actual book cause we don't know what happens to her but this makes me feel better.
Author's Response: Thanks. This chapter, despite being about the battle, is set further into the future than anything else I've written. -N-
