Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 02/28/11 16:31
Chapter: Waning Moon

Great job with each story :-)

Author's Response: Thanks, Mark will continue to appear in my stories (usually with Lavender). -N-

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 02/28/11 16:20
Chapter: Voldemort Doesn't Play Quidditch

I agree with your Author's Note, I do not think I could bear to read about an entire Quidditch Team wiped out!

Author's Response: Even in battle, for Oliver, everything revolves around Quidditch. -N-

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 02/28/11 12:52
Chapter: Justin Time

Excellent story telling. You really do a nice job.

Author's Response: Thank you -N-

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 02/28/11 12:44
Chapter: Abbott Ails

Interesting chapter. Nice to see different characters views!

Author's Response: Thanks. I needed to get a good idea about how Hannah has matured. -N-

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 02/28/11 12:39
Chapter: Ernest Endeavours

Wonderful job! :-)

Author's Response: Thanks. -N-

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 02/28/11 12:09
Chapter: Good Bones

Terrific chapter from Susan's point of view!

Author's Response: Thank you. -N-

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 02/28/11 12:06
Chapter: The Confession of Augusta Longbottom

Two thumbs up for these stories :-)

Author's Response: Thanks -N-

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 02/28/11 12:00
Chapter: Protheroe's Perspective

:-( Sad chapter! Loved it though!

Author's Response: Thanks. Polly will reappear in later chapters.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 02/28/11 11:55
Chapter: Great to be Back

Great job writting Luna...I can really picture her having that mental dialogue going

Author's Response: Thanks, Luna’s brain must be a strange place.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 02/28/11 11:52
Chapter: Galleon

Enjoyable to read! I liked this chapter :-)

Author's Response: Thank you. -N-

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 02/28/11 11:48
Chapter: The Calm Before

Interesting idea doing the first chapter from Poppy's point of view :-)

Author's Response: The final score for this story will be 12 DA members, 5 Other Characters (like Poppy), 4 “bad guys”, 3 Original Characters and a creature. -N-

Reviewer: minervassister
Date: 02/27/11 8:58
Chapter: Ouroboros

Thank you for another great chapter.
It really feels like a true interpretation of the Malfoy family.
I like the ambiguity, is Narcissa guiding them into a better life or will they remain self-seeking and dangerous.
Perhaps Amdromeda will help her sister to adapt to the new world post battle.

Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.
Only two more chapters! The end is in sight. The Malfoy's were still trying to ingratiate themselves with Voldemort even during the battle. That's why Draco went to the Room of Requirement. I tried to keep Narcissa's words neutral, specially her words about Andromeda. "Whether or not I believe it is immaterial, Draco." She thinks it's the best course, but I wanted the question to remain.

Reviewer: One Lily
Date: 02/25/11 17:08
Chapter: Ouroboros

it was great. the point of view was really cool. looks like nothing has changed with the malfoys! cant wait for the next one, im always suprised!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I think that one important thing has changed. There has been a shift in the balance of powere between Lucius and Narcissa. As the Battle is now over, so this story is coming to an end. Only two more chapters. -N-

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 02/24/11 16:43
Chapter: Ouroboros

Very well written! Loved it!!!

Author's Response: Thank you. This was the last of the Tales to be written, but it doesn’t fit well at the end. -N-

Reviewer: AngelEJC
Date: 02/24/11 16:37
Chapter: Ouroboros

You absolutely NAILED the Malfoys! These stories just keep getting better and better!

Once again, thank you for updating regularly!

P.S.: Thank so much for responding to my reviews, it makes my day when I see I've received a response!

Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.

I’ve decided that I like Cissie, she’s just so sneaky.

The readers of Aurors and Schoolgirls would disagree about regular updates, but with only two more tales left I will be able to concentrate on my other stories

I always reply to reviews. It’s only polite.

Reviewer: hpgploversforever
Date: 02/24/11 15:10
Chapter: Ouroboros

WOW you make her sound so much worse then she actually is. And Lucius sound so mad at him self.
You just have this nake for writing very great stories.

Author's Response:
Worse? We don’t really know how bad Narcissa is. We do know that she will ignore the Dark Lord’s wishes to defend her son. Really, Lucius should be mad at himself. He cultivated dozens of subtle links and an air of respectability. Then he a invited a madman into his home.

Thank you

Reviewer: iwishicouldwrite
Date: 02/24/11 14:26
Chapter: Ouroboros

great chapter! I loved how it was narcissa's point of view, she was a great character to show the true values and beliefs of the Malfoys. I also really liked how she wasn't cowering under lucius like in a lot of stories, but she had her own ideas and is craftily plotting the best way to preserved her family (how slytherin of her!) You did a great job of showing that the malfoys don't all of a sudden drop all of their prejudices after the war ends, but instead find the path that will reward them most in the end.

Author's Response:
Thanks. I hope that you’re still not entirely certain about Narcissa’s beliefs. The decision to lie to “The Dark Lord” was hers and hers alone. And I’m not certain that her plea to Snape in HBP was entirely supported by her husband. Draco might like the idea of a “cowering” wife, but it seems to me that Bellatrix and Andromeda are strong in their own way, why should Narcissa be different?

Reviewer: desertsol98
Date: 02/24/11 14:18
Chapter: Ouroboros

excellent chapter and I believe very true to the charecters.

Author's Response: Thank you. -N-

Reviewer: minervassister
Date: 02/19/11 5:17
Chapter: Broken Flint

Another great chapter, liked the way that you gave some virtues to these characters. Loyalty, courage and love are not solely owned by the good side in your stories. Your characters are rounded and believable.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Millicent thinks that Miles is "almost as slippery as Malfoy" but I'm sure that her love and loyalty is true. Why shouldn't it be? -N-

Reviewer: AngelEJC
Date: 02/18/11 17:19
Chapter: Broken Flint

I never even thought about the Slytherins after the Battle of Hogwarts, much less Milicent, Goyle, and Flint!

Thank you for your advice, it really has helped me a lot! I have gone back and rewritten all 50 pages of my fic into something more satisfactory. I currently have three betas (my best mate, my sister, and a fellow HP fanatic from my horse stable) and I'm going to send it in to the beta board also.

Thank you for your advice and keep the stories coming!

Sicerely and gratefully,

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Marcus, Millicent, Miles and Gregory make such a good team, don't they :-) Good luck with your writing. -N-

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