Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 01/30/15 14:58
Chapter: Voldemort Doesn't Play Quidditch

I thought that was a very clever title and some very good advice on the part of Oliver Wood. I think Tom Riddle would've been a much better man if he had liked Quidditch.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 01/30/15 14:38
Chapter: Justin Time

Colin was very smart and talented. I hope against hope that he was at least able to catch a glimpse of Harry before he died.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 01/29/15 18:28
Chapter: Abbott Ails

I liked seeing Hannah's viewpoint on their meeting with Ernie, especially since I just read Ernie's viewpoint. I wish the acromantula had gotten ahold of Goyle.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 01/29/15 15:05
Chapter: Ernest Endeavours

I am loving all of these individual viewpoints. I guess the Seamus/Luna conversation would be disconcerting during a battle.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 01/29/15 14:31
Chapter: Good Bones

Susan sounds like a very practical young woman. She also seems very brave and ready to die for the cause. I especially liked the ending when she explains how she knew the right side would win.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 01/28/15 18:46
Chapter: The Confession of Augusta Longbottom

That was sad but funny at the same time. It's funny that what's bad for some people is nothing to others. Augusta could've just AK'd Mr. Lestrange.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 01/28/15 17:46
Chapter: Protheroe's Perspective

Interestingly, I know a woman at work whose last name is Strang. I loved your portrayal of Colin Creevy. He was so young and so brave. It seems he was always hero-worshipping Harry and then gave his life for the cause.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 01/28/15 16:18
Chapter: Great to be Back

Luna is very interesting. Sometimes I state the obvious. It's a odd but true fact that once someone, like Luna, is labeled a certain way they are always perceived that way even when to do so is incorrect. Do you think Luna forgave her father for selling Harry out?

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 01/28/15 15:51
Chapter: Galleon

I had forgotten about the pimples and the Galleons. You have to feel sorry for Cho. She kind of fell into disfavor. I think she made up for any wrongdoing by giving her support during the Battle.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 01/27/15 18:29
Chapter: The Calm Before

I thought I read some of these before but I couldn't find any reviews so I must be thinking of something else. I would've been so frantic waiting for something to happen that night. Thankfully, there were calm people who could be productive in the face of mayhem.

Reviewer: Velda Quix
Date: 07/13/13 14:31
Chapter: Ouroboros

Wow, clever story! I have a new opinion of Narcissa now...

Author's Response: Thank you. I really enjoyed writing this chapter. -N-

Reviewer: Velda Quix
Date: 07/13/13 13:16
Chapter: Bad Faith

Haha, everyone gets to thump Draco!! The coup de gras goes to Ginny however, as always...

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. This is a fairly grim collection of stories, and I wanted to lighten the load. People have accused me of Draco bashing. I have no idea why. ;-D -N-

Reviewer: HermioneJean1
Date: 04/29/13 0:56
Chapter: Index

Great!!!!!! This is an AMAZING story. WELL DONE!!! :D

Author's Response: Thanks for all of the reviews. This is now (again) my most reviewed story here. I hpe ypou enjoy my other stuff, too. -N-

Reviewer: HermioneJean1
Date: 04/29/13 0:47
Chapter: Paperwork

Good original character!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you. -N-

Reviewer: HermioneJean1
Date: 04/29/13 0:35
Chapter: Ouroboros

Very good, but again, the swear. Still good though.

Author's Response: Thank you. -N-

Reviewer: HermioneJean1
Date: 04/29/13 0:26
Chapter: Broken Flint

This was good, if I blocked out the swear word. I'm sorry, but I greatly dislike swearing. You'll surely understand. Anyway, it was still a good chapter

Author's Response: I rarely use any swearing in my stories. “Ron swore” was good enough for JKR, but there are a few places where I think that they’re needed. -N-

Reviewer: HermioneJean1
Date: 04/29/13 0:19
Chapter: Snakeslayer

Neville. Who would have thought be was the hero. "Excellent, excellent." - Albus Dumbledore

Author's Response: I’m a huge fan of the reluctant hero, and that’s Neville. -N-

Reviewer: HermioneJean1
Date: 04/29/13 0:07
Chapter: Son of the Air

Wow! Buckbeak! You're a genius!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks, I loved writing this one. -N-

Reviewer: HermioneJean1
Date: 04/28/13 23:58
Chapter: Parents

Carmine greengrass. You made her Lav-Lav's mum. Great thinking

Author's Response: I wanted Lavender to have some rather dodgy relatives. -N-

Reviewer: HermioneJean1
Date: 04/28/13 23:52
Chapter: Falling Angel

:( poor George. Angelina is great. Fabulous!

Author's Response: Thank you. -N-

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