Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 05/28/11 13:15
Chapter: Chapter 13 - Terror in the Tube
Ooooooo!!! I think I get it! A tunnel maybe?! Love it!!!
Reviewer: sunshinesparkles
Date: 05/14/11 16:58
Chapter: Chapter 12 - Hearings
Ah! I loved the new chapter! Seriously cannot wait until the next one comes up! Hurry please!
Reviewer: Princess_of_Wales7
Date: 05/09/11 16:55
Chapter: Chapter 12 - Hearings
WOW! I am loving the suspense. I cannot wait for more!
Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 05/04/11 15:21
Chapter: Chapter 12 - Hearings
AWESOME!! Love it! Great job! oh my gosh post quickly!
Reviewer: grangergirl35
Date: 05/03/11 15:30
Chapter: Chapter 12 - Hearings
the woman in the green is Hannah, and they are attempting to hide the Dokes, right? :D Keep it up!
Reviewer: The Don Vinnie D
Date: 04/17/11 10:58
Chapter: Chapter 11 - The Overnight and the Trap
This was a very good story. All the chapters have been easy to follow and held my attention. Sorry i didn't review earlier. This has been very good
Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 04/07/11 13:07
Chapter: Chapter 11 - The Overnight and the Trap
Excellent!!
Reviewer: Averypotterlover
Date: 04/06/11 19:59
Chapter: Chapter 10 - An Un-Malfoy Christmas
LOVE IT
Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 03/27/11 6:21
Chapter: Chapter 10 - An Un-Malfoy Christmas
Fantastic!
Reviewer: BeautyAndTheBeast
Date: 03/14/11 8:59
Chapter: Chapter 9 - The Taint
Write more NOW!!!!!
I really liked it. There's suspense now with the whole Maliaite-thing, and I absolutely LOVE how Scorpius is in Gryffindor, and not Slytherin. Totally a twist. What I'm not fond of, though, is how Lucius and Narcissa are total jerks. I mean, it is kind of obvious that all they wanted in the end was a nice, peaceful life. I don't expect them to be all goody-goody, but they always favored their son. Although, considering they lost their glory and riches, I can understand.
Reviewer: LunaLover203
Date: 02/26/11 12:38
Chapter: Chapter 8 - Idiots and Fires
This chapter's amazing, like all the others. i love the bit where lucius malfoy says there's a idiot in the fire, tend to it,to draco, it was really funny.
i would like to see a bit more of scorpius albus and rose though, i know it's about draco to but i love the littler people, i wonder if it really was the dokes' i wonder wonder wonder, another thing i wonder is what lucius malfoy put on his toast after draco stole the marmalade??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: bigtimer
Date: 02/26/11 6:06
Chapter: Chapter 8 - Idiots and Fires
wow the plot thickens. great story so far love seeing the young malfoys being decent.
Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 02/26/11 5:30
Chapter: Chapter 8 - Idiots and Fires
Uh oh! Love it! Can't wait to see more!
Reviewer: LunaLover203
Date: 02/11/11 10:39
Chapter: Chapter 7 -The Griffin and the Orchid
i love this story, it's on my favorites and i cant wait for you to write more
Reviewer: locanena
Date: 02/11/11 9:42
Chapter: Chapter 7 -The Griffin and the Orchid
awe tears
Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 02/11/11 7:36
Chapter: Chapter 7 -The Griffin and the Orchid
Brilliant!! Love it !
Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 02/11/11 7:36
Chapter: Chapter 7 -The Griffin and the Orchid
Brilliant!! Love it !
Reviewer: kri
Date: 01/27/11 21:51
Chapter: Chapter 6 - After the Match
nice..
Reviewer: TheAlieVee
Date: 01/05/11 11:09
Chapter: Chapter 5 - Shades of Pride
Awww!! Lily is so cute! Awesome story so far, please update soon
- Alie V
Reviewer: leftrightmiddle
Date: 12/30/10 13:15
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Encounters on the Platform
I really love next-gen, and I'm very excited to see what you have in store for this story!
