Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 01/12/12 3:00
Chapter: Chapter 15 - Epilogue Kitty-Kat and Panda Boy

I really enjoyed this story :)

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 01/10/12 3:58
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Sacrifice of the Chlldren

That's really nice of Harry to give Draco grimauld place to stay in. :)

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 01/10/12 3:30
Chapter: Chapter 13 - Terror in the Tube

Really good chapter, I like how it had alot of suspense:)
But what's brilliant???

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 01/09/12 5:34
Chapter: Chapter 12 - Hearings

Oh no that's no good the memo landed on top of the mote so then nobody will be able to read the note! Thats not good!

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 01/07/12 7:24
Chapter: Chapter 9 - The Taint

I'm kinda confused........

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 01/07/12 7:02
Chapter: Chapter 8 - Idiots and Fires

Who are the two men?
I'm also really glad you had Draco stand up to lucius like that, I mean really, it's about time! :P

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 01/05/12 5:06
Chapter: Chapter 7 -The Griffin and the Orchid

It's good to see Draco and Astoria making friends :)
And I'm also glad that they want a place o their own :)

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 01/05/12 0:51
Chapter: Chapter 5 - Shades of Pride

The joint catch thing was ood, I diddnt even know it was possible :P

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 01/04/12 23:22
Chapter: Chapter 4 - Messages from Hogwarts

I'm glad to see draco getting along with the potter/weasleys :)

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 01/04/12 21:19
Chapter: Chapter 2 - The Unexpected

This will make a very interesting story, a malfoy in Gryffindoor :)

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 01/04/12 20:59
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Encounters on the Platform

Poor scorpius his only friend was punt gryffindoor:(

Reviewer: ajruss7
Date: 11/02/11 5:30
Chapter: Chapter 15 - Epilogue Kitty-Kat and Panda Boy

Loved it. Well done

Reviewer: Jamiema
Date: 10/14/11 19:12
Chapter: Chapter 15 - Epilogue Kitty-Kat and Panda Boy

This story was so good! You're a very good writer. I felt as if JK Rowling herself had written it.

Reviewer: Hopes Mom
Date: 07/19/11 16:04
Chapter: Chapter 15 - Epilogue Kitty-Kat and Panda Boy

This has been a great story - I enjoyed reading about your version of the next generation and their parents. Thank you for sharing your story!

Reviewer: Askalot95
Date: 06/29/11 20:32
Chapter: Chapter 6 - After the Match

That was stupid. No professor would take a hundred points for something stupid like fighting.

Author's Response: Professor Longbottom has many reasons to be hard on his house. 1.) A student was picked on by one of their own. This was not 'acceptable' Gryffindor v. Slytherin 2.) A class leader the Quidditch Captain was the ring leader of the attack. 3.) A large number of the students watched the incident without intervening to help the student 4.) No one attempted to get help from teacher. 5.) He is new and younger than most Heads are. He is making a point 6.) He knows what it is to be the victim of student on student attacks and he will not stand for it. 7.) He and his wife were having a romantic dinner when he got told of this stupidity by Professor MacGonagall's protrait.

Reviewer: Askalot95
Date: 06/29/11 20:30
Chapter: Chapter 6 - After the Match

That was stupid. No professor would take a hundred points for something stupid like fighting.

Reviewer: Princess_of_Wales7
Date: 06/25/11 11:51
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Sacrifice of the Chlldren

This was an awesome story. I loved how after everything that happened in the past, Draco has changed into a kinder person.

Reviewer: sunshinesparkles
Date: 06/18/11 20:18
Chapter: Chapter 15 - Epilogue Kitty-Kat and Panda Boy

I loved it! It was really well written and very creative! Please tell me you are writing another one. Scorpius and Rose are so cute, I really liked how you captured the innocence of their childhood crush.

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 06/18/11 4:29
Chapter: Chapter 15 - Epilogue Kitty-Kat and Panda Boy


Reviewer: NextGenerationWriter
Date: 06/09/11 17:32
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Sacrifice of the Chlldren

I like this story. Next Generation is my favorite genre, and my favorite type of next generation stories are Scorpius Malfoy ones. Keep writing this, it is very good! One little thing though: Kreature is spelled Kreacher. Update soon please.

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