I loved it, I hated it! I hate to admit it but it made me cry! :( *sniff* good story.
Author's Response: Aww! Thanks!!!!! I almost cried writing it!! =( Thanks for reading!
wow....that story was so sad, i almost started crying......aw sad, but good job!
Author's Response: Thanks!!!! I appreciate it! ^^ Glad you liked it! =))
Great story *sniff* :( !
Author's Response: Thanks!!!! It is sad =( But those darn plotbunnies! *snaps*
You could actually make this I longer story but din't it would be to weird. I personally wasn't fond of it too sad, I like happy endings.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Sorry, I forgot to say this, but your story reminds me of Josh Groban's song. "Remember When It Rained" I'm not sure why, it was playing on my computer while I was reading this story, and I guess that's why. Great job!!
Can I just say that I felt like crying? This was so moving. So good. Emotional. Shirley Temple-Black's baby boy almost died like that, that's what this reminds me of. Sorry, little flashback. I'm putting you on my favorites. It was really really good.
Author's Response: Lol actually I almost died like that also. Thanks for reading!! I'm glad you liked it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_________________^
I liked that a lot. Is it finished, because I wanted to read about what happened afterward. It seems like it is finished, but the info says it's not. I thought I'd check with the author.
Author's Response: Actually its finished. I'm glad you liked it though! I have to change the info, sorry for the confusion!