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Name: cjbaggins (Signed) · Date: 08/28/10 0:40 · For: Books, Candles and Invitations
I enjoyed this. I am usually turned off by long, descriptive passages in a fic, but you write well, so I wasn't put off. One small error - you've put 'refugee' (the person) instead of 'refuge' (the place) in the fifth paragraph. Continue writing! I like one-shots that fit well into Ms Rowling's own work. cj

Author's Response: Thank you very much :) I know what you mean about the long, descriptive passages but I'm glad you found mine alright. *facepalm* Oops, I think I'm doomed to suffer from typos. I'll go fix that 'refuge' up straight away. My fingers type faster than my brain thinks so I'm surprised that was the only typo that managed to sneak past me and my beta. Thanks again for my first review, ~Nicole


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