Reviewer: ladon
Date: 10/21/11 3:04
Chapter: Chronicle 2

Too many mistakes the levicorpus spell wasn't even invented yet otherwise pretty good

Reviewer: OtterMoone
Date: 08/21/10 3:27
Chapter: Chronicle 1

Ahhhh, my mistake, I didn't see the "re-imagining" part. Well, bravo so far ; )

Reviewer: OtterMoone
Date: 08/21/10 3:23
Chapter: Chronicle 1

Wow, this is very interesting :) ! However, I noticed two mistakes. One, Tom's father and grandparents were all killed by the Killing Curse and found dead at the dinner table (GOF) , and two, Dumbledore's hair was still Auburn while Tom was in school (HBP) . I think it sweet that you hinted at Tom caring for Albus a bit (: . I am going to add this story to my favorites so I can see when you update.

Author's Response: Hey! Thank you for reading and responding, it's really helpful and inspiring! As for the murder of the Riddles, I know I was deviating slightly from the actual chain of events; it is Orochi's magic acting on Tom Riddle's memories that render only certain portions of the memory, and not necessarily the entire event - which will be a key feature when the story grows (hint hint, ha ha!) As for Dumbledore's hair, that is my bad! Thank you for pointing that out :) I'm glad you enjoyed Tom's developing relationship with Dumbledore; that will be really important too!

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