Reviewer: I hate Tuney
Date: 06/26/11 15:36
Chapter: Chapter 9- Black Holes and Revelations

* when.. sorry.. :P

Reviewer: I hate Tuney
Date: 06/26/11 15:35
Chapter: Chapter 9- Black Holes and Revelations

Oh, I loved it!! The kiss in the library was so romantic and James' runaway makes me wanting, where is the next chapter up? :D

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked the kiss and I agree--james' leaving after kissing Lily is one of the more intriguing chapter endings i've written :) probably the next chapter will be up somewhere in the beginning of July, as I won't have my computer with me for the next week, but it's about halfway done!

Reviewer: heliopath
Date: 06/22/11 4:04
Chapter: Chapter 9- Black Holes and Revelations

O n plz make the next chapter a long one if possible. :)

Author's Response: I'll try!

Reviewer: heliopath
Date: 06/22/11 4:00
Chapter: Chapter 9- Black Holes and Revelations

:/ why didn't he just tell her that he had to go away?! :( she'll b so heartbroken!! :(
I liked the chapter, otherwise.. Loved james n remus' exchange!! :) I have heard the quote many times but never the whole thing, just the 2nd part. I like the whole quote better!! So thanx for this addition in my general knowledge! :)
O n thanx for updating the chapter so soon, it was a very pleasant surprise!.. Plz continue writing, luv it.

Author's Response: Thanks for the wonderful review! I like the whole Congreve quote better too. In answer to your question, James hasn't been telling anyone about his mum because he doesn't want to burden anyone else, and everyone would be pitying him, which he doesn't want. I think he and Harry share that trait. Then when Lily was upset already he would have only added to her misery by telling her, but he needed to be there for her anyway. Needless to say, very conflicted. And I was surprised at how fast I wrote this chapter as well; I think it's a record xD

Reviewer: jamlil
Date: 06/20/11 10:28
Chapter: Chapter 9- Black Holes and Revelations

OH MY GOD!! That was amazing! please update soon again!

Author's Response: Thank you!!! I don't know if I can get chapter ten out as soon as this one (I wrote this in record time) but I've started it already. Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: PongOTongTongERong
Date: 06/20/11 9:50
Chapter: Chapter 9- Black Holes and Revelations

most definitely loved it . the kiss was perfect !

Author's Response: Aw thank you so much! I really appreciate that you thought it was "perfect" because I was afraid people would be like, "Wait...what?" It is important to the story, though (besides the fact that I've wanted to write this chapter since the story began). :)

Reviewer: cg_123
Date: 06/19/11 19:03
Chapter: Chapter 9- Black Holes and Revelations

Great story :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: lilyginnylily
Date: 06/19/11 16:51
Chapter: Chapter 9- Black Holes and Revelations

Omg im am so glad for this chapter it is awesome please write more and soon great job!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! A chapter like this where there's so much character development (and romance, of course!) is wicked important, so I'm happy that you liked it. :)

Reviewer: potterboy11
Date: 06/19/11 16:49
Chapter: Chapter 9- Black Holes and Revelations

Loved this chapter especially the William Congreve quote. I can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: Thanks!! Yeah, I thought Remus would say, "Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned," but then I did a bit of research and realized I liked the actual quote a lot more. I'll try not to make it too long of a wait for the next chapter. :)

Reviewer: Taki-Maki
Date: 06/19/11 16:17
Chapter: Chapter 1- That Easy

A-M-A-Z-I-N-G! It gets better each chapter, write more!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Glad you like the story, and I have been improving as the story goes, I think. Also, I've finally got a tentative outline for what's going to happen, so I definitely will write more. :)

Reviewer: locanena
Date: 06/13/11 19:19
Chapter: Chapter 8-Flying Lessons

aww write more!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! And I will! :)

Reviewer: GinnyPotterFan26
Date: 06/13/11 6:51
Chapter: Chapter 8-Flying Lessons

I've really liked reading this story so far, and I'm sorry I haven't left any comments up to this point. When I start a story after multiple chapters have been published, I'm usually too engrossed in reading one chapter after another to say anything in between. Especially when a story is so good. I think you've done a wonderful job with these characters, and your story has a wonderful mix of positive and negative emotion. I'm excited to see where we go from here, and though we all know Lily and James end up together, it's always interesting to see different takes on how they get there. What can I say? I'm a sucker for Lily/James stories (and H/G, as should be obvious by my name, but I suppose that's rather unrelated).

Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate the depth of your review--I love seeing what stands out to people--and I'm glad you like the story so much. That's why I started writing this, because I feel like JKR gives us hints through the series on how James and Lily get together but not exactly how they get there. And I enjoy a good H/G fanfiction too :)

Reviewer: jamlil
Date: 06/13/11 2:17
Chapter: Chapter 8-Flying Lessons

wow!!!!!! i realy like this story.keep on writing and update soooooooooooon.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! :) I started chapter 9 last night, so it shouldn't be too long of a wait.

Reviewer: heliopath
Date: 06/11/11 10:48
Chapter: Chapter 8-Flying Lessons

Coming back to the story, i luv ur portrayal of all the characters, they r perfect, exactly as they should be. :) i thought that Gmariam is the best james/lilly author, but i like you just as much now. Great job, thumbs up! N keep writing. Looking forward to the next chapter. :)

Author's Response: Thank you for both lovely reviews!! I love the feedback and I'm glad you like the story. Also, I've read Gmariam's work and it's awesome, so I really appreciate the comparison. Good luck on your finals!

Reviewer: heliopath
Date: 06/11/11 10:44
Chapter: Chapter 8-Flying Lessons

Aww! Such a sweet chapter!! Luvd it! :)
i found this story 2-3 days ago while looking for some light reading.. I am having my finals, so didn't want to start a novel, as i wouldn't have been able to put it down! :/ so i was searching for a james/lilly fanfic (my favourite category!) n came across this one, n loved it.
N today while taking a break frm studying to refresh my saturated mind, i just checked on the off-chance that u might have updated it, n it was such a nice surprise to see that you had! Thanx for brightening my mood, this being the only highlight of my day. :)

Reviewer: Jupiter13
Date: 06/10/11 16:03
Chapter: Chapter 8-Flying Lessons

I love this story! Really nice job. Moooore!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! And more will come fairly soon, since it's summer now. :D

Reviewer: I hate Tuney
Date: 06/10/11 13:24
Chapter: Chapter 8-Flying Lessons

hahahahahahah!! how funny ths chapter was!!
and yhe tag on broomsticks was soo romantic!! I like that Lily and James are getting closer and closer..How many chapter will you write for this story?

Author's Response: First off, thanks for the review! I'm glad that's what you got out of the chapter, because it's meant to be fun but also accentuate the tension between them. Right now, it's about a third of the way through the story, or maybe a little more, so there will probably be 20-24 chapters in total. That's my best guess, since I haven't written the rest yet. :)

Date: 05/16/11 23:31
Chapter: Chapter 7-The Storm Is Coming In

Its an awsum story but please dont make anyone die!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! :) I can't promise anything, but there won't be any non-canon deaths.

Reviewer: kaffca
Date: 04/26/11 1:41
Chapter: Chapter 5-What Friends Are For

i like it a lot. i've just begun writing my first fanfic and i can finally apperciate the effort it takes.x

Author's Response: Thank you! :) Well, this is my first fanfic too, so we're in the same boat. It's a lot of effort, but I love it so much!

Reviewer: jamlil
Date: 04/24/11 11:07
Chapter: Chapter 7-The Storm Is Coming In

I like this's good.update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! And I'll try. :)

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