Really sweet! Ron and Hermione are so perfect! :)

Author's Response: Thank you -N-

Author's Response: Thank you -N-

It was great I liked it alot.

Author's Response: Thank you N

This is fun. :) I like that Ron tricked Hermione with the homework diary--very clever of you. :) I also really like the relationship that you have written between Ron and Hermione; both seem very in character and yet mature. Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I try my best to keep Ron and Hermione in character at all times. After the locket, Hermione’s torture and Fred’s death even Ron cannot remain immature (in my opinion). Daft, yes, immature, no. N

Your timing is lovely. I was so needing a good R/Hr fix this afternoon. :) I like the changes a lot... they are quite subtle, but still make a big difference imho. I just love their day together, and that Hermione let her studies go for once. But my favorite thing here is your Ron characterization... he's attentive and sweet and clever, which I believe rings true to the grown up Ron we see in DH. Nice writing.

Oh, and regarding that credit... I was SO trying to be nice! Haha. :)

Author's Response: Lori What can I say, you like my characterisation of Ron (-: Hurrah! You were entirely correct in your criticism of the original version, Hermione was much too humourless. Moving her away from uptight and closer to pleased to see Ron but slightly annoyed with the way he’d planned things worked well, I think. Thank you. N