Wow I really love your work :) I love the way you portrayed Lucius and Narcissa. I never really cared much about them when I read the series but now I'm kinda starting to care about them :) I'm really looking forward to the next chapter and I hope that you post it soon :P
That was...wow. Incredibly descriptive. It's a painful situation for anyone in love to think about. You captured it beautifuly. Great job.
oh, a question: Does this take place during Voldemort's first or second time of power? I suppose that'll probably be clear as the story goes on.
Author's Response: It's the first time, which I should have put in the description lol. Thanks for reminding me, that could be a helpful piece of information ;)
This is so good! Very emotional, yet the characters are still the same people we know from the series. I didn't think I could care that much about Lucius Malfoy, but your story is changing that...I look forward to the next chapter when it's ready.