I really can't wait to read the rest. You have a great start!
i like the storyline. it's new and refreshing. i sure hope to be seeing more chapters soon.
Your story has potential and I like it. It's awesome. Brilliant even. I really do like how you wrote this chapter and I can not wait to have a read of next and the next one and the next one and so forth. =]
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm sorry this has taken a while - RL put me on a long hiatus - but my next chapter's in the queue and I really hope that you do like it. XD x