It was a great story, especially the sweet ending. I felt like it was a bit longer than it needed to be... for example the section at the zoo, although it was cute, didn't seem to build toward the plot much to me. Also the continuous references to golf kind of pulled me out of the story a little, and it didn't seem to tie in particularly.
Having said that, I still enjoyed it and it was a very sweet and cute story :).
I really enjoyed, very nicely written.
aaawwww so cute!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the story. Thank you for telling me.