Reviews For Father's Day
Reviewer: The_Real_Hermione
Date: 09/10/10 5:09
Chapter: Father's Day

It was a great story, especially the sweet ending. I felt like it was a bit longer than it needed to be... for example the section at the zoo, although it was cute, didn't seem to build toward the plot much to me. Also the continuous references to golf kind of pulled me out of the story a little, and it didn't seem to tie in particularly.

Having said that, I still enjoyed it and it was a very sweet and cute story :).

Reviewer: arwen85
Date: 08/11/10 16:17
Chapter: Father's Day

I really enjoyed, very nicely written.

Reviewer: Slytheringirl6
Date: 08/01/10 17:19
Chapter: Father's Day

aaawwww so cute!

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