Woow... I actually really enjoyed your story. I love how it develops and the ending is so perfect. It really reminds you it's Voldemort we're talking about here :) I loved the story so great job :)
Not something I'd normally read, but I was curious. Consider me satisfied.
PLAESE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!
Disturbing a fact this is, but I actually enjoyed the story a lot. It is very consistent with Bellatrix Lestrange's characterization; that is, she is incredibly obsessed, and perhaps love, Voldemort. And though Voldemort has never know love or even affection for anyone, he could still has certain lust that needs to be release sometimes. I thought you did a great job at writing and hoped to read more stories from you.
It was impeccably writen. And so so so very much creepy!!
I think a moment like this might have easily happened. Especially the abuse that followed. I mean, nothing good can ever come out of Voldemort, Bellatrix should have known better. OR, considering she's the nutjob she is, she might enjoy that as well...
I'd say I'm sorry for her. But... it's Bellatrix. She was actually awaiting that eagerly!! So... I guess she got what she wanted!
I think your writing was good. The sensual part was extremely good, as it got me sitting on the edge of my seat and I had to constantly remind myself that this was Voldemort and Bellatrix we were talking about! I am supposed to feel repulsed and icky and icky about them, not steamy and sexy!! So, good job!! ^.^
Author's Response: Thanks so much! It's great to hear something like that from a reader. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Good story. I've always imagined those two together :)