Reviewer: Rose Nym
Chapter 5 – Unexpected Guests
I think Drinny is an abomination, but I was bored, so I read it...I really loved your poem Yume and you have the same great style here. This is funny, and mostly in character...good job with the narration.
Author's Response: LOL! Well, thanks for sticking it out. Heheh. And I'm glad you like my narrator. *grins*
I do have some non-Drinny stories: Snape/Lily (Their Last Goodbye), Blaise/Luna (My Heart), Lily/Scorpius (A Flight to Remember), and Harry/Draco (Memento Mori). ^_^
Chapter 4 – Mobility Issues
ARGHHHH. The site ate up my review! So now I'll have to make do another one.. :(
I missed out chapter three, but anyway, this was another funny chapter (I think everything is..) You should seriously write some humour fics. The plot seems to be moving slow, but I think you'll do it justice. I was totally engrossed with your 4th chapter, considering I'm quite honesly intimidated by the length of your story. How do you do it? How do write these details? How many years did it take you to finish the story?! (you said the whole fic's been written already).
I have to go to sleep now, so.. thanks for the entertainment! :)
Author's Response: Lol! Poor you and damn those review goblins who eat up reviews! ^_^
This will be one of my shorter chaptered stories, actually. You might not want to read my other ones, which are 50, 75, 100, and 200K! ^_~ This story, which I already completed months ago, took me almost two weeks to write. I actually do quite well writing with a deadline. Shades of Grey, which is much longer, was written in two weeks as well. ^_^ Plan B took a couple of months, but Prelude to an Affair took much longer. Plus, I need to update it. The first book is complete, but I have yet to post the last two chapters. *guilty look*
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Have a good sleep. ^_^
Reviewer: Daughter of the Light
Chapter 3 – Dust Figures and Dirty Dishes
Ginny has so much spunk. This is hilarious and really enjoyable to read!
Author's Response: Oh, if you think Ginny is feisty here, wait 'til the next chapter. ^_~ I'm glad you're liking it so far. Thank you for reviewing. ^_^
Chapter 2 – Secret-Keeper No More
I'm pretty bad with like, "excellent" reviews, so I'm sorry about this. I'm the kind of fan that'll go, "ZOMG, WHAT'S NEXt?!?!?!!11"
It's very interesting that you go to the (sorry about the following words) frequently, but not that much, used cliche of Draco joining the Order, though I'd really like to know what's the reason behind why Ginny was suppose to be with him.
That was a good cliff hanger, by the way. Still being funny, I see. Sometimes, I don't know what category this fic should be in. D/A? AU? Humour? Nah, just.. Draco/Ginny, really.
Anyway, I don't get why this doesn't get much attention; your writing is fab (hah, fab). Sooo, hope to hear from you soon (again)! Sayonara, Lia-kun!
p.s. You're British-ized. Good job :) I hope I get, too. XD And I get an aura from you that you're an anime fan..?
Author's Response: Lol, interesting review. While I'm sure there are many many cliches in this story, it's not one where Draco joins the Order. You'll have to wait and see what it will be. ^_~ It really does fit into a lot of categories, but, like you said, it's really D/G (although, it's not really a romance). ^^
I suppose I am British-ised, lol, but I'm not British. So, I'm sure my work could be picked apart by those who are.
Thank you so much for your lovely comments. You really know how to flatter a girl. ^_^
P.S. You read my aura correctly. I am an anime fan. ^_~
Chapter 1 – In Medias Res
Love it! Keep it coming.
Author's Response: Thank you. ^^ Hopefully, the next chapter will be validated soon. ^_^
Chapter 1 – In Medias Res
That was incredibly entertaining! And I don't just go around saying that to everyone else, I assure you. The little details in your narration makes up a completely, well-thought of flow.
"The ice in his steel-grey eyes belies the tumultuous emotions frozen within."
"It had me entirely riveted and snickering into my hands with glee, but back to the story..."
Really, these details are fantastic! My examples may only have been two, and I may be too lazy to look at the other quotes that I like, but I love your style. You provide entertainment in the department of comedy, and you deliver the plot of Draco's story so well that it almost makes it seem like it's happening right this very second.
I have a question for you. Are you a hundred something years old that used to tell stories centuries ago, long before there was no light to overcome the rythm of night time stories? Or are you a desescendant of someone like that? The many adjectives, and facts about Muggle terms says that you're very intelligent, and excells in writing. I'm not much of Draco/Ginny shipper, bt I'm looking forward to this very much.
Author's Response: Wow, what a humbling-inspired review. Thank you so very much. I'm especially happy that I managed to ensnare a non-D/G shipper. I hope I can placate any fears by letting you know that it's not a typical romance. More of an enemies coming to an understanding fic. ^_~
To answer your question: I'm not a hundred or something years old. Lol. I guess I just picked up a lot of my Muggle terms from reading and such (as Don Quixote is a favourite of mine). But, thank you so much for your compliments. I'm glad you're liking this particular narrative style. The story is already complete, I'm just waiting for validation on chapters. Hopefully, the second chapter will be up soon.
Thank you again. ^_^ ~Lia