Reviewer: majestic_ginny
Date: 08/15/10 1:32
Chapter: I: If it's a broken part, replace it

Wow, this was a really nice one. I loved your characters, and Molly and Lysander, though minor and never-mentioned-in-the books characters, totally came to life. It was really sweet, and I loved it. I especially liked Molly, and how she never let Lysander speak. :P It was hilarious. Overall, it was an awesome chapter. Can't wait for more! :D

--Nadia

Reviewer: Annalise28
Date: 08/04/10 8:13
Chapter: I: If it's a broken part, replace it

This was lovely, Ronnie. So adorable and nice and sad and beautiful. I can't wait to read more about this adorable little pair. :)

~ Annalise x :)

Author's Response: Thank you Lise! At least you think that the introduction was adorable because things aren't going to stay this way. Haha. Thanks again. Ily! -Ronnie Xxx

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