its amzingggggg!
YOU SHOULD SERIOUSLY WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER REALLY REALLY SOON.
I don't get the last sentence, but you are SO GOOD! You should get something (not harry potter fanfiction, but something) published! THANK you for not having swears every other word!
This is a very interesting idea! I look forward to reading more!
Ahhhhhh I so wish Lucian were good but he is too sketchy for that.
This story is very well written, and I love how accurate it is in terms of events that are happening, etc. I'm intrigued though as to why Voldemort has yet to be mentioned as would he not be rising to power around now? Or maybe he is still Tom Riddle. I guess Lilly is still very young and when she is pregnant with Harry that's when Voldemort is at his height of power.
Excellent! Eager to read more!
Thank god she's become friends with Lily. The poor kid's going to need good friends. I like how you've made it so similar to Harry's first meeting with Ron and Hermione on the train.
Wow! I am intrigued! Very well written!
Amazing chapter, you never cease to impress me, and if were to say that lucian seems like a shady character, would I be right?
Author's Response: Maybe, just maybe.... :P
Amazing chapter, you never cease to impress me, and if were to say that lucian seems like a shady character, would I be right?
Amazing chapter, you never cease to impress me, and if were to say that lucian seems like a shady character, would I be right?
Amazing chapter, you never cease to impress me, and if were to say that lucian seems like a shady character, would I be right?
Amazing story so far, its really grabs you and pulls you in while reading it. You are an very talented author and I hope you will update soon:)
That was sweet, for a Slytherin. Makes me want to scream at the computer 'Don't take the flowers! Don't take the flowers!' It's like a set up for a horror movie. Somehow, I know it won't be good.....
Please give me more!!! It is so good. I really like that you didn't make Diana so mean, and made her nice in a way. I want more!!! Pretty Please?
interesting very interesting please update soon this story is very different to other styles I've read and I'd like to finish it
Wow I really like this story. I really think you should keep going with it.
I'm very interested in the story so far it seems really good...
Also, please update as soon as possible. I luhv to go online and find a new chapter on one of my fav stories!