Reviewer: FawkesToTheRescue
Date: 09/10/10 15:58
Chapter: Chapter 1

I am so sorry to bother you but I just read it again and I just can't get over how extraordinary this is. It is just so, so, perfect. You did everything right. So much details, so much thought, it is so absolutely brilliant.
--FawkesToTheRescue--

Author's Response: Wowwww! :o Thankyou so much for the awesome review! I feel so honoured.. I haven't had a review in so long, to see someone being so complimentary about my work does wonders for me ego, I can tell you that! I'm so glad you enjoyed it, Sirius is my favourite character, and I feel that so many fics out there don't do justice to his character, so that you likes this makes me so happy. I am easily pleased :') Thankyou again.

Reviewer: FawkesToTheRescue
Date: 09/10/10 15:50
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow. Pardon me if I make a few mistakes; i can barely type. This story is so, so, so, good. Like really you have no idea how much I enjoyed reading this fic.

But as much as I enjoyed it I have a few constructive crisicisms I want to point out.

Just kidding! There is nothing bad I can say about this fic.

You captured the characters all so, so, well. I wish I could do that.

I have always been a big fan of the story behind Peter Pettigrew and this fic is like EXACTLY perfect for me. Really, really, well done with Peter. It was amazing! Absolutely briliant!

I'm sorry, I can't type properly; I am in such a daze over this story. Like after I submit this review, I'm probably going to read this over. And over. And over.

If I had an account on the beta forums, I would submit this for a QSQ. And then create another user so they could submit it.

You also captured the essence of friendship and best friends perfectly.

What am I saying? You pretty much captured EVERYTHING perfectly, from the first word to the last.

If you don't mind, I will read this again now.

--FawkesToTheRescue--

Reviewer: Hermi101
Date: 07/25/10 14:26
Chapter: Chapter 1

I absolutely loved this! You've done a great job of writing about Sirius's life, and the present tense makes it seem so intense and - it's just so beautiful! I love this story!

Author's Response: Thankyouu... I originally tried writing it in the past tense, but kept switching to the present without meaning to, so I ended up changing the whole thing :P I'm glad that you think it works!

Reviewer: TonksfortheMemories
Date: 07/16/10 11:41
Chapter: Chapter 1

I'd love to type a decent review, but I'm too busy crying over this beautiful fic. AMAZING!

Author's Response: Thankyou so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: paperrose
Date: 07/12/10 16:57
Chapter: Chapter 1

This was so, so beautiful because you managed to create a tangible, obvious abyss between the Marauders and Peter, and yet still managed to maintain their naivete at the same time. Sirius realizes that Peter is being pushed away, and yet he doesn't see the full consequences of that until it's too late. And at the end, where Sirius asks Remus whether he thinks Peter hated him was just wonderful and sad.

Just wonderful! Keep it up!

Amber

Author's Response: Thankyou :) I'm glad you liked the Sirius and Remus interaction. Those two are just my absolute faves <3

Reviewer: herm_own_ninny13
Date: 07/12/10 14:39
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh my goddddd stop making me cry it's only noon.
This was so exactly how I felt about all of them, you did a beautiful job with this. A thousand times like.
-Maggie

Author's Response: Thankyou so much :')

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