Wow, really sweet ending! I don't really read much of James/Lily fics, but this one was really good. I'm looking forward to reading more about them from you. :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad I was able to convince you they are a fun read. ;) I appreciate your comments and reviews and humbly refer you to my author's page, where I have several other James/Lily stories, as well as a few on the way. Thanks again! ~Gina :)
Whoa! Can't wait to see what happens next. :)
Author's Response: A belated thanks for the review, I appreciate it! I hope you enjoyed the ending! ~Gina :)
great chapter :D
wow that was suspenseful i was worried something had happened lily. good suspenseful chapter i wonder what remus tells lily
i liked the chapter but i think lily saying i love you was kind of soon because she and james havent even started dating. and she really just realized that she liked him. but still a good chapter
Yay for the update! As always looking forward to the next one :-)
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, thank you so much! The final chapter is up and I hope you enjoy the ending! Thanks again! ~Gina :)
awwww why doesnt anything work out for them? nice chapter
another brilliant chapter :D
i really really dislike snape. i mean i know he turns good and everything but i still dont like him and u just portrayed him exactly as i would have pictured him in school. and i like you didnt make james into some sort of softy who doesnt want to break rules. i like how he still went after snape. u kept his true to his character
great chapter. :D
noooo!!!! why did lily have to blurt out she needed help at that moment???? great chapter :D
kind of a short chapter but i liked the remus/lily interaction.
oh this is an interesting start i like how you just jumped into the story without all the boring stuff. cant wait to read on :D
Poor Lily stuck on the stairs all night! She is lucky that Remus was able to help her. Did the cloak get left on the stairs? I am looking forward to the next chapter - this should be an interesting discussion. Thanks for writing!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Good catch on the cloak, lol. I think one of them remembered it, though. ;) I also think the following discussion will be pretty straight forward, don't you? It's all out there now, after all. ;) Thanks for reading, I really appreciate the review! ~Gina :)
Found the story last night, n just cudnt stop reading it till the end! (The result being that i went to sleep around 4 a.m!!... no, i am not a slow reader, startd at 2.. a.m that is :p) n i liked it so much that here i am again hoping that u have somehow put up the next chapter overnight!! :D plz plz put it up as soon as possible.. cant wait to see what happens next! by the way, i luv ur portrayal of the marauders n their friendship. gud job! thumbs up!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review. It made my day when I got it. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story that much. Hopefully the next chapter won't be too long. Thank you for the compliment on the Marauders. I've written other stories about James/Lily if you are interested. I really appreciate the review, thanks again! ~Gina :)
Hi there :-)
What a lovely chapter. I really enjoyed it, and I thought that Lily as a character has really come a long way since the start of the story. I have to admit being a little confused by some of her actions near the start, by by now I've come to love her. The whole scene with Lupin was just wonderfully written. It played out in such a realistic way that it might as well have been canon. Poor Lily, getting stuck in the staircase all night. I wonder if she knew that years later the same thing would happen to her son?
Author's Response: Elene! Thank you so much for the review! And thank you soooo much for looking over this chapter. I really appreciate your quick hard work and helpful comments. I hope you can do the same with the last chapter when I get around to it. I really appreciate the comment about Lily, because it means I've managed to make her different yet believable and develop her over the course of the story. And I heart Remus and Lily every time I write more of this (which is a bit odd since it's a J/L story!) Thanks again!! ~Gina :)
You are evil to end it there! What is James' reaction???? Evil, I say! :)
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks, Lori. I like being called evil. ;) I'm guessing you enjoyed it, so I'll try to finish it for you soon. Thanks so much for the review, I really appreciate it! ~Gina :)
Found this story last night, have since read all chapters, and am completely hooked! When will the next chapter be up? I've gotta know what happens!!
Author's Response: Hi there, thanks for the review! I'm glad you found this and enjoyed it so much. The next chapter is finished but needs a good scrubbing so hopefully it will be up soon. Thank you so much for being interested, it's always great to know someone is looking forward to an update. Thanks again for the review! ~Gina :)
Ahhhhh!!! Such a good story. DON'T STOP WRITTING!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I won't stop. I'm working on the last chapter but it will be a bit longer. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading this one and leaving such an encouraging review! ~Gina :)
Please, please, please update this story soon?! I have really enjoyed all the chapters and can't wait to see what's next.
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for the review - I am working on Chapter 10, although it might be a little while longer than usual. Other J/L stories and drabbles keep popping up, lol. Thank you so much for asking, it's nice to know someone is looking forward to it! ~Gina :)