Reviews For Arthur's Obsession
Reviewer: mzap
Date: 10/04/10 13:51
Chapter: 4.Snowball Fights and Frosty Friends

Wonderful job! I've been waiting for an update! I love the way you've written Molly and Arthur, so true to their characters and this little scene was great to see. I always love seeing familiar faces, such as Hagrid and Dorcas and you did a great job incorporating them. Fantastic job and I can't wait for more! :)

Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I'm glad you think the characters are IC. I really enjoyed writing this scene.

Thank you for reading and, especially, for reviewing!

Reviewer: mzap
Date: 08/16/10 13:46
Chapter: 3. Imperfect Prefects

Oh, wonderfully done! I happen to be a Ted/Andromeda shipper so I was especially happy to see that appear here. I like the way Molly defended herself and I love the conversation she was having with Dirk. Definitely giving Arthur that extra push, eh? ;) One question though (and perhaps I didn't read carefully enough): when did Arthur come in? I feel like he just popped in out of no where. Well, anyway, very nicely done and I fall in love with Molly/Arthur more every time I read. :) Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Yay! Another person who enjoyed the T/A! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and all the Molly-ness.

Hmm, I guess I wasn't clear enough with Arthur's appearance, since you are the second to comment on his slipping in unoticed. Granted, I was trying to keep the attention focused on the argument rather than on Arthur's walking in on it but...

Reviewer: lilyevansfan
Date: 08/14/10 21:05
Chapter: 3. Imperfect Prefects

I just love how you threw in Ted/Andromeda! It fits perfectly with this wonderful fic. But.. I don't remember how Arthur got into the scene...

Author's Response: I'm glad someone else thought Ted and Andromeda worked. And Arthur came in under the purposefully vague title of 'a certain red headed boy,' which is probably why you didn't immediatly notice him. =D

Reviewer: 08Alohomora09
Date: 08/04/10 2:46
Chapter: 2. Pillows and Pity

Molly and Arthur make such a sweet couple, and it's nice to read about them for once!

I suggest you add a bit more Arthur and his Muggle obsession for fun? Dirk would be able to help Arthur understand how muggle things operate. Perhaps during a holiday or Molly's birthday, Arthur could show her affection by giving her his favorite muggle fascination? Just an idea :D

Author's Response: I agree, they are sweet. There is something about love that lasts through seven children and over thirty years that is irresistable to me. Don't worry, there will be more Muggle fun. Arthur is still Arthur after all. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Rose Nym
Date: 08/03/10 20:22
Chapter: 2. Pillows and Pity

Yes, I did like this chapter and am loving this story. Arthur is one of my all-time favorite characters, and Arthur/Molly certainly deserves more attention then it has gotten. This story is well-written, interesting, and sweet, and I look forward to more when it comes. By the way, the title of the first chapter "That Marvelous Molly" is PERFECT. So in character for this ship.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am flattered you think this story is well-written, etc. And I'm glad you like the chapter name. Thank you for reviewing, and I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

Reviewer: hogwartsbookwormsister
Date: 08/01/10 16:47
Chapter: 2. Pillows and Pity

Okay, so is Dirk going to tell her? I'm curious!

Author's Response: Haha, you'll see!

Reviewer: hogwartsbookwormsister
Date: 08/01/10 16:29
Chapter: 1. That Marvellous Molly

Oh, poor Arthur. You can feel his pain in the last few paragraphys of the chapter.

Author's Response: I feel sorry for him too, but I'm glad you can feel his pain too.

Reviewer: mzap
Date: 07/27/10 20:53
Chapter: 2. Pillows and Pity

Oh, I really liked this! I've been meaning to read a good Arthur/Molly romance and I'm so glad I happened upon yours! I think you do a very good job on their characters as I could very well see Arthur as the kind of boy to hide his feelings for quite a while. The small gestures were very sweet and I love how this is starting as a 'simple' (for lack of better term) romance, without it being clouded by a lot of drama. I also like the choice of Dirk as Arthur's friend, as we also see a peek of a character we don't see much. Brilliant job and I can't wait to read more! :)

Author's Response: Oh, thank you for the lovely review! I'm glad you like the story, the characterization, and Dirk. I like them too, haha. Thank you, and I'll try to update quickly!

Reviewer: Midnight_Unicorn
Date: 07/14/10 17:18
Chapter: 1. That Marvellous Molly

Awww, poor Arthur!!! I hope that you update soon and give him a bit of good news! Love it!

Author's Response: Haha, yeah. Poor, poor Arthur. Thanks for reviewing! I will work on updating soon for you.

Reviewer: madhumakhi
Date: 07/13/10 11:31
Chapter: 1. That Marvellous Molly

I like your story and I like the way you have described Arthur's feelings for Molly. I am looking forward for more.

Author's Response: Thank you! And thank you again. Keep reading!

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