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Reviewer: Rainy2000
Date: 06/02/12 19:53
Chapter: Prologue

Amazing! Can't wait for more! Keep writing!

Reviewer: magic to do
Date: 11/13/11 13:02
Chapter: Chapter 1

i am excited when the third chapter comes out

Reviewer: magic to do
Date: 11/13/11 13:02
Chapter: Chapter 1

i am excited when the third chapter comes out

Reviewer: iruthb
Date: 08/14/11 11:36
Chapter: Chapter 1

No way! This was going to be the original title for the piece I'm currently intending to write! Great minds think alike! Thankfully our ideas are very different.
I love the concept. And it sounds like a good plot in the making.

Now, I have next to no criticisms, apart from that I'm dying to know what Lexie looks like. So Iplease do us a description of her.

If I'm going to nitpick, I'd say Fred was slightly OOC. I can't really him being the emotional type and say "I love you". Maybe that's just me though.

Reviewer: hpgploversforever
Date: 07/29/11 10:10
Chapter: Chapter 1

I'm looking foward to reading the rest of your story. Keep the great chapters coming.

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! That's so nice. The next chapter will be up soon with any luck! <3

Reviewer: arnold_the_pygmy_puff
Date: 06/29/11 9:20
Chapter: Prologue

This is really good. I read another story with the same name as this though, but they're pretty much different. update soon!

Reviewer: mahogany_wand
Date: 07/12/10 20:07
Chapter: Prologue

I am so glad you are starting this story back up again. I really enjoyed the chapter and I can't wait to hear Alexa's backstory. Growing up with the Dursleys must have been difficult, but I have to wonder how they would have treated a girl. I also wonder how she played out in the seven books, and whether she changed the personalities of any of the main characters!

Anyway, I can't read the next chapter!

~M_W

Author's Response: Ah, my old friend! I can't wait for you all to read the next chapter that'll be posted soon! :) - AP x

Reviewer: Midnight_Unicorn
Date: 07/12/10 6:00
Chapter: Prologue

It's an interesting idea- Harry having a younger sister.....I have a feeling that he would have been super protective of her! I like it. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I hope you keep reading - it gets even more interesting. :)

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