Reviewer: SongsOfAPhoenix
Date: 09/24/10 9:54
Chapter: Silent Hero

i like this a lot. your writing style is fluid and descriptive and is very close to actual HP style..i look forward to reading the rest

Reviewer: Rose Nym
Date: 08/03/10 20:58
Chapter: Silent Hero

interesting, well-written, and characterized. I especially love the last paragraph. It seems how Harry would think, and helps establish the reconciliation between them. Writing about the main characters is probably the most difficult type of fan fiction to write, and this is pretty good. I am interested to see more of Andromeda, and like how you are fleshing her out. The images at the funeral are quite fitting, too.

"Pity that the Dark Lord's followers got off easier than innocent people they imprisoned in their uprising."

What a thought-provoking ironic idea. Really makes you think a lot, about mercy and justice. I think that ultimately the deaths of the innocent are not in vain, and I wonder, who's truly better off, the innocent who died, or the guilty who live? And, yet, in being treated better than they had treated others, perhaps they can come across something called goodness that they had ceased to think existed anymore.
Good job writing, and I await the next chapter when it's ready.

Reviewer: m2m
Date: 07/28/10 16:37
Chapter: Silent Hero

i'm excited to read more!

Reviewer: k4c
Date: 07/26/10 14:49
Chapter: Silent Hero

I really liked this chapter and love how you have Harry helping to look after his godson, Lupin and Tonks would be proud :).

I also like your idea that Harry would speak about Snape at his funeral, to try and make people aware of his true allegiance to the good side :).

Keep up the good work :)

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 07/26/10 7:10
Chapter: Silent Hero

Love it! Can't wait for more! I think you are really hitting on how Harry would've blamed himself for all that had happened reagardless of how silly it would be to do so and I love how you have put him with Teddy!

Reviewer: k4c
Date: 07/19/10 14:10
Chapter: The Next Big Scoop

I like how you opened with Rita Skeeter, determined to add finishing touches to her book; different to how other stories begin :).

I also like your characterisation of Malfoy and that he has changed (but only slightly of course :P)

Looking forward to the rest of your story :)

Reviewer: hermy008
Date: 07/12/10 23:24
Chapter: The Next Big Scoop

im very interested to see where this story goes. i liked this one a lot! also very realistic bridge between battle of hogwarts and epilogue. very good! :)

Reviewer: bigtimer
Date: 07/10/10 8:19
Chapter: The Next Big Scoop

well written draco bit that is exactly how'd he react in prison good start i'm interested to see where you go with this

Reviewer: siriusblackhead
Date: 07/09/10 21:47
Chapter: The Next Big Scoop

Really good beginning! Really well written. I love how you started with Rita (the old hag) - it was very different. Looking forward to the rest!

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 07/09/10 19:43
Chapter: The Next Big Scoop

interesting! I'm hooked!

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