Reviewer: The Dark Lords Right Hand
Date: 08/19/12 0:54
Chapter: In Which a Boy Bleeds

Appart from the fact that I had to re-read several previous chapters to remember what actually happened, I was delighted by the update. I love your writing style and the story content has had me hooked since you first published it. Please please please publish more often! :)

Author's Response: oh, thank you so much! I'm currently writing the next chapter (albeit slowly), and then there's wait time for my beta and the queue, but it should definitely arrive sooner than this update did! :)

Reviewer: Sapphires At Sunset
Date: 08/10/12 3:12
Chapter: In Which a Game Begins

Sorry for the other review. I was confused.
Amazing Story!!~Anna

Author's Response: Glad you like it! The next chapter is currently in the queue, so hopefully you won't have to wait long for more. :)

Reviewer: Sapphires At Sunset
Date: 08/09/12 4:01
Chapter: In Which a Spark Flies

What happened to Luna?

Author's Response: She died! I thought I mentioned that in the third or fourth chapter?

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 08/28/11 13:20
Chapter: In Which a Game Begins

Yikes!! Fantastic!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Literally994
Date: 07/21/11 20:43
Chapter: In Which a Hat Sings

Wonderful, It would be interesting if you showed Petunia and Vernon's reaction to the news, is Luna Lorcan's mom? did she die???

Author's Response: Thank you! Perhaps I might include a little snippet of Petunia and Vernon's reactions. :D Luna is indeed Lorcan's mom - next chapter you find out some more about what happened with her.

Reviewer: GinnyPotterFan26
Date: 06/12/11 17:48
Chapter: In Which a Hat Sings

I've really enjoyed this story so far. I'm glad you've made it canon-compliant, and I really like your Sinead. I also appreciate the references to people we know, and I'm excited to see where this story goes.
I do hope though that something significant comes of Lily being in Hufflepuff, something besides, as Freddie said, her learning not to be so prejudiced about the houses. I always imagined that Albus would be the one (if any) of the Potter children to be in a different house. Some of the other cousins (like Freddie or Hugo) wouldn't have surprised me, but I guess I always imagined Lily would be pretty much a carbon copy of either her mother or her namesake.
That aside, the writing is great, and I look forward to what's to come.

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: majestic_ginny
Date: 06/01/11 0:34
Chapter: In Which a Spark Flies

Wow, I love this story! It's really well written, and sometimes it makes me feel like I'm reading something written by Rowling herself :). I love all the details you've put into it, and everyone seems in character. Good job, and I can't wait to read more. Oh, and I loved the part about the wandmaker - I'm Bangladeshi too ^_^.

Hope to see more soon!


Author's Response: oh wow, thank you for such a lovely review! :D

Reviewer: bekki-unknown
Date: 05/19/11 13:19
Chapter: In Which a Hat Sings

Ooooh! I can't believe you put Lily in Hufflepuff, I personnally thought she would be in Gryffindor, but it's your story!

I think the first few chapters were quite sluggish and a bit slow if I'm honest, but I am really enjoying it now, you have found a nice pace. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Thanks! Hopefully by the next chapter, if all things go as planned, the pace will pick up even more.

Reviewer: MagicMandy
Date: 05/14/11 11:13
Chapter: In Which a Spark Flies

This is pretty good so far, and it is well written. Although it's interesting, I'm glad to hear that the story is going to start moving along. Can't wait to see what you have in store for Sinead.

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: kri
Date: 05/13/11 3:20
Chapter: In Which an Owl Flies

Curious:when r ur xams getting over??
suggesstion:put some more spells and magic iin ur story
comment:all d characters are lovely....
p.s.:best of luck for xams and story;)

Author's Response: -My last exam is on the 27th. -Indeed! Magic and magic-related things will make up a bulk of the story soon. -Thank you very much! :D

Reviewer: The Dark Lords Right Hand
Date: 05/12/11 11:07
Chapter: In Which a Hat Sings

I'd almost forgotten about this, when it suddenly popped up as updated. I never expected Lily to be in Hufflepuff but I like the turn of events. Looking forward to the next chapter, especially if you'll be revealing things...

Author's Response: Finals are driving me a little nuts at the moment, but the next chapter should be in the queue right after I finish all my exams and projects. Thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: kri
Date: 05/11/11 9:26
Chapter: In Which a Hat Sings

I am dazed,amazed,speechless,nd in luv wid d story...keen at d nxt chpter..i lik d pace so keep it up...

Author's Response: Thank you! I promise after my finals are over I'll get to writing the next chapter. :)

Reviewer: Princess_of_Wales7
Date: 05/09/11 16:08
Chapter: In Which a Hat Sings

I really love the story so far. I love how Dudley completely changed his perspective on magic because of his daughter. I love Lorcan, Freddie, and Cillian. It is very intriguing. I can't wait for the rest!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! It means a lot to me that you like the characters. :)

Reviewer: sam_1034_lily
Date: 05/09/11 11:58
Chapter: In Which a Hat Sings

Poor lily! I can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks; I hope to. :)

Reviewer: littlewolf
Date: 05/08/11 19:35
Chapter: In Which an Owl Flies

i see a lot of promise in this story, and i've already fallen in love with cillian (i have a soft spot for nice protective elder brothers). please write on! i'd be looking forward to the next chapters =D

Author's Response: Thank you! I promise to continue; I have high hopes for this story (it may just be the first one I actually finish!). :D

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 05/08/11 15:10
Chapter: In Which a Hat Sings

Don't worry about the story moving slowly! The bests one do! That's how people build up and get hooked! I love your story! and just so you know I didn't getted hooked on JK's 1st book until midway through chapter 3!! (^>^)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so happy you like the story, and your words are quite reassuring. :)

Reviewer: Xhaviera
Date: 04/13/11 11:32
Chapter: In Which a Spark Flies

very intresting story, but it's sad you havn't updated since last November. I like the fact that it's the younger child in the family who's got magical abilities, although it would have been more fun if Dudley had gotten a little more upset when they learned Sinead is a witch. but all the same, great plot so far. I hope that you in the future will tell us more in detail what prof. Penrose is saying about Harry during the History of Magic lessons.
Hope you will continue soon

Author's Response: Thanks for your interest! Unfortunately the next chapter has been in the hands of my beta for around a month for some reason, but hopefully she'll have it back to me soon. >.< I mean, I'm also quite perturbed that it's been four and half months since I updated!

Reviewer: AReader
Date: 03/26/11 16:58
Chapter: In Which a Spark Flies

Updated oon my b-day....and not ever since! I really hope you haven't abondoned this story! ;) If you have...;(

Author's Response: I promise I haven't! Then next chapter is with my beta at the moment, so I should be submitting it soon! :)

Reviewer: TeamHarry112
Date: 01/19/11 21:32
Chapter: In Which a Spark Flies

PLEEAASSEE continue this story!!!!


Author's Response: I will, I definitely will! :D

Reviewer: TeamHarry112
Date: 01/19/11 21:32
Chapter: In Which a Spark Flies

PLEEAASSEE continue this story!!!!


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