Reviews For Isla
Reviewer: MaybeOneRaindrop
Date: 01/14/12 9:05
Chapter: A Fairy-Tale

Perfect story. I loved it. :)

Lily

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: The_Real_Hermione
Date: 11/04/10 21:59
Chapter: A Fairy-Tale

This was a great story, I liked the way you focussed on Isla's relationship with Bob but the darkness of her story was in there as well. I loved her letter at the end - seemed like something Sirius would do.

I would have liked to have seen more interaction between Bob and Isla - perhaps you could have shown one of their conversations or something.

But other than that, it was great!

Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely review! I considered another scene with the two of them, but decided it would be better if left to the readers. Some of the best stories leave more to the imagination.

Reviewer: hestiajones
Date: 09/21/10 8:04
Chapter: A Fairy-Tale

Oh this was so much fun to read? Again, why no reviews? I am flabbergasted. D:

It was interesting to see a fun and less bleak take on Isla's story. And you certainly wrote it in an entertaining way - I have to say, Isla's letter made me laugh out loud. I loved your characterisation of both characters as well!

I just feel that the story was a bit rushed, and as your current word count stands somewhere between 3500-4500, you could have expanded it a bit more. All the essential moments are there, but they need a bit more filling out.

That said, this was a pleasant read.

Keep writing!

~Natalie.

P.S. Can you tell I am stalking your author page? Haha!

Author's Response: Somehow, I couldn't write a love story with too much sadness-- it just didn't work. I tried and tried to fill out the story, but decided to leave some things up to the reader. Sometimes, too much detail bogs a story down. I am so happy that someone has finally reviewed the story. P.S. No duh. But I'm so honored by it!

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