Nice! I wonder what Lily would think...
cool poems. Remus's are my favorite, probably because he's my favorite marauder. I love the chocolate poem and can relate. Looking forward to seeing Sirius's! However, in several places it seems like a word is missing. Maybe you could double-check them again for typos?
I found this more interesting than James, but then, I find Remus a more interesting character.
The whole Remus/Chocolate thing is cliche, but since it comes at the end of a pretty interesting piece, you get away with it... :-)
Author's Response: I had actually written the chocolate poem when I had finished typing the other poems, and had realized that it was so dark... and yeah, I'm not quite satisfied with James's poems, and I think that I'll re-write it... Thanks for the feed back, Nymphie THE Original
I like Peter's Poems more, I'm sorry! But these are great too, I love the excellent vocab use, with "surreal" and "Gubraithian": not words you hear every day... so I hope you continue that with Remus's (Ramblings? Writings? I don't know what alliteration you'll choose...).
I'm favorite-ing this!! :)
'In the wrapper or on the street...'
Oh yes, I can see that clearly. :) I laughed quite loudly at that, nice work! No hate mail from me I'm afraid.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!!!!