Reviewer: Luna_Loves_Thestrals
Date: 06/05/13 23:09
Chapter: Potter's Prose

Nice! I wonder what Lily would think...

Reviewer: Rose Nym
Date: 08/05/10 21:37
Chapter: Remus's Ramblings

cool poems. Remus's are my favorite, probably because he's my favorite marauder. I love the chocolate poem and can relate. Looking forward to seeing Sirius's! However, in several places it seems like a word is missing. Maybe you could double-check them again for typos?

Reviewer: ProfPosky
Date: 06/28/10 10:52
Chapter: Remus's Ramblings

I found this more interesting than James, but then, I find Remus a more interesting character.

The whole Remus/Chocolate thing is cliche, but since it comes at the end of a pretty interesting piece, you get away with it... :-)

Author's Response: I had actually written the chocolate poem when I had finished typing the other poems, and had realized that it was so dark... and yeah, I'm not quite satisfied with James's poems, and I think that I'll re-write it... Thanks for the feed back, Nymphie THE Original

Reviewer: SilverLily_13
Date: 06/16/10 21:51
Chapter: Potter's Prose

I like Peter's Poems more, I'm sorry! But these are great too, I love the excellent vocab use, with "surreal" and "Gubraithian": not words you hear every day... so I hope you continue that with Remus's (Ramblings? Writings? I don't know what alliteration you'll choose...).

I'm favorite-ing this!! :)

Reviewer: SilverLily_13
Date: 06/16/10 21:46
Chapter: Peter's Poems

'In the wrapper or on the street...'

Oh yes, I can see that clearly. :) I laughed quite loudly at that, nice work! No hate mail from me I'm afraid.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!!!!

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