Love your story. I can't wait to see how things are going to develop. Keep writing, please!
I liked how you didn't mention hedwig only said that harry's face became stangely blank
More chapters please!
Gasp! I sort of had an inkling that this was going to happen but damn, George can't get a break and I feel sorry for him. I'd have his babies if it would make him feel better.
Poor dear! It makes me really sad to think about everything that he could have been going through, but this is nicely done, so thank you.
I love your story! You really should write another chapter.
I'm so entranced by this story. I think it's got a wonderful outlook on how the war really would have affected people, George particularly. I cannot wait to read more.
Awesome! Loved it!!
Can relate to it.. :(
"Although the Weasleys were very close, not to mention their extended family of non-relations, Fred and George had always been something of an island just off the coast of the continent." This was a great image. I do hope very much that you will continue this story to its conclusion.
Great chapter, please update soon!:)
this is very good and very well written. you capture the emotions perfectly. i also especially liked the metaphor comparing the twins to an island - very fitting and one i hadn't heard before. i look forward to the rest!