This story is excellent! Please continue!
please continue to develop this story...i really like the direction its going in..and i would love if you posted Walls again
This story is quite humourous so far, therefore I'll say job well started (not quite done yet) Please keep writing, as this looks as though it could be an interesting year :)
I love this story. You should definitely keep writing it. The chapter was hilarious; I really loved the prank Remus played on James. Please update soon!
Excellent chapter! Lily's characterisation is good, very vivid, and I loved the banter between her and James. Lily and Remus' dialogue didn't seem to be working quite as well, for some reason...it seemed like you were kind of skimming the topic, keen to get on to the bit with James.
That aside, there's not a whole lot I can think of to criticize. I smiled the whole time I was reading this, and if you knew what kind of day I've had you would realise that is a very big compliment indeed. Looking forward to your next!
Liking it a lot so far. I used to follow your old work, back when I was under a different penname I believe...your style has is as strong as ever. I'm impressed. :)
Interesting start, I'm looking forward to read more!
//Osced
