Reviewer: Miss B
Date: 08/25/10 23:54
Chapter: Hogsmeade: Conversation

Great chapter, I can't wait to see what will happen next! The only thing bad I can say about it is that the plot seems to be moving a but slowly, but other than that it's really good. You're an excellent writer.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. You’re right, this story stars slowly with relationships and the main part of the plot has hardly even begun. N

Reviewer: minervassister
Date: 08/25/10 5:30
Chapter: Hogsmeade: Conversation

Great chapter, good to see Ginny and Harry getting over their problem and seeing Ginny getting something wrong.
Also nice to see Nev and Hannah getting closer.
Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: I’ve seen many stories where Ginny is little miss perfect. She isn’t. Hannah and Neville? Neville has a girl so will they, won’t they? N

Reviewer: Bastet
Date: 08/22/10 18:36
Chapter: Hogsmeade: Conversation

Nice. I must say I got a bit "scared" with the Ginny you portrayed in the last Chapter, but now it's going the way I thought it would.
Congrats, keep it up please!
Oh, and update soon, obviously. :p

Author's Response: Ginny made a mistake. It happens I'm glad that you're happy with the direction I'm taking. The next chapter is already in the queue. N

Reviewer: Rose Nym
Date: 08/09/10 10:06
Chapter: Hogsmeade: Miscommunication

interesting to see Ginny's perspective. I'm glad you aren't making their relationship just picture-perfect after the war like many fics do, but are portraying them more honestly. Ginny might be perfect for Harry, but is she a perfect person? No. I am looking forward to more and hope to see how they resolve this. One thing that's kind of confusing to me is Dean and Luna. I think it was definitely hinted at in Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows that Dean liked Luna, but does Luna like him back? Luna seems to me like she might not want a boyfriend, like she wouldn't know what to do with one. So how does Dean get Luna to go out with him?Then again, I have not read Grave Days, is it explained there? Will we see any more of them in this fic? When does Rolf enter the picture? Will any of it be from Ron, Hermione, or Harry's point of view? Well, I guess I'm done with questions and am looking forward to more of this.

Author's Response:
Ginny (and Harry) will continue to misunderstand and upset each other occasionally. The Dean and Luna on/off not sure if it’s a relationship will continue in the background but you won’t see much of it. It isn’t really explained in Grave Days, though Dean and Luna do appear and Dean does try.

The "Hogsmeade" section will be all from Ginny’s pov. The next Chapters (the Gryffindor/Slytheri Quidditch game) are from Harry’s and both Hermione and Ron will get their turn.

I have some (rather strange) plans for Rolf Scamander. Luna marries Rolf “much later in life” according to JKR and you won’t meet him in Aurors and Schoolgirls, or its sequel.


Reviewer: macheel
Date: 08/04/10 12:06
Chapter: Hogsmeade: Miscommunication

I really like the story! Are you still planning on updated it. It has been so long?

Author's Response: Hi Yes. The next chapter is complete (as are several more). I will be submitting as soon as Spontaneity (a Ron/Hermione one-shot) clears the queue. N

Reviewer: k4c
Date: 07/20/10 16:29
Chapter: Quidditch: Rejection, Selection

Well I have to say I'm happy you wrote a continuation to Grave Days, which I really enjoyed.

And so far I'm enjoying this :). Bit suspicious of Dean though :o

Author's Response: Thank you, I hope that you continue to enjoy this story. Dean? I hope that you’re suspicious of some of the others soon. N

Reviewer: Bastet
Date: 07/12/10 5:42
Chapter: Quidditch: Rejection, Selection

Nice! I really liked the prequel to this fic.
I like the way you stay true to possible plots and caracters.
Keep it up please, I'd like to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you. I’m trying to stay true to the future history as told in (often conflicting) interviews by JKR. I have a few more stories of Harry’s future to tell. The next chapter will be resubmitted within a few days. N

Reviewer: Dragon potter
Date: 06/27/10 23:01
Chapter: Hogsmeade: Miscommunication

funny and cool story

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. N

Reviewer: sam1
Date: 06/09/10 16:10
Chapter: Hogsmeade: Miscommunication

why are u spoiling your very beautiful story with too much teenage uncertainties light it up dude

Author's Response: The teenage uncertainties will continue, sorry. But there will also be some lighter moments. N

Reviewer: macheel
Date: 05/26/10 11:50
Chapter: Quidditch: Rejection, Selection

I really like this story. It is fun to see them back in school. Update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks. The adventures of Head Girl Hermione aond Quidditch Captain Ginny will continue soon. -N-

Reviewer: sam1
Date: 05/26/10 11:41
Chapter: Hogsmeade: Anticipation

it is a very nice story hope u finish it in fact i am anxious to read more of the above

Author's Response: Thanks. I will be submittinf a chapter a week (I hope). -N-

Reviewer: fairylights1006
Date: 05/19/10 18:50
Chapter: Quidditch: Rejection, Selection

Great first chapter. I love how you stay so true to the characters. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thank you. More soon. N

Reviewer: EmotionalTeaspoon
Date: 05/19/10 16:18
Chapter: Quidditch: Rejection, Selection

Ginny's side of things...interesting. Hermione seens ery strict, but i guess that could be expected.. looking foreward to more!

Author's Response: Hermione is at school without Ron and Harry so she's rather lost. More soon. N

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 05/16/10 20:01
Chapter: Quidditch: Rejection, Selection

Very good! Can't wait to see were you go with this! I like Ginny here, will there looks into Hermoine's head too? I think I would have picked Maisie and did Hermoine pick up on the name? Didn't Ron impersonate Maisie's dad at the ministry the year before? :)

Author's Response: The initial few chapters will be from Ginny’s point of view, but this will shift later (beginning with chapter 6). James Devine caught more balls during the trial, Ginny has made her choice. Ron did, indeed, impersonate Maisie's dad. I’m sure that Hermione picked up on the name.

Reviewer: minervassister
Date: 05/16/10 12:17
Chapter: Quidditch: Rejection, Selection

Great start. Good to see Ginny and Hermoine getting some ordinary school experiences after their ordeals the of previous year.

Author's Response: Thanks Ordinary school experiences, unfortunately, don’t make for much of a story… N

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