Reviews For Behind the Curtain
Reviewer: primagirl89
Date: 05/25/10 11:38
Chapter: Chapter Two

Didn't except that Sirius would take the news about the no magic quite so calmly. Does he think that he still is in his world? Nice surprise with James at the end.

Author's Response: Ah, well he's had the night to mull it over, no? I'm glad you liked the surprise. Peace, Virgil

Reviewer: Marshall Marie
Date: 05/23/10 10:31
Chapter: Chapter One

I think its really good i cant wait to read the next chapter :)

Author's Response: Thank you! The new chapter should be up soon :) Peace, Virgil

Reviewer: Homeless Hippogriff
Date: 05/15/10 19:48
Chapter: Chapter One

I really like the concept of this story and your writing is really good. Great detail, saying that Sirius would immediately try to change to his dog form when he heard someone coming. The fact that he can't change builds up the mystery of an alternate universe where he can't do magic, and I also like that you mentioned he still has his wand. I'm looking forward to how you develop this, especially how Sirius will discover that he is in a non-magical world and how the relationship with his brother will develop.

Author's Response: What a lovely review! I hope you're satisfied by the way the story unfolds in later chapters :] Peace, Virgil

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 05/15/10 17:54
Chapter: Chapter One

Interesting! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: (Hopefully) You won't have to wait too long! Peace, Virgil

Reviewer: armagod679
Date: 05/15/10 16:37
Chapter: Chapter One

Interesting idea... I'll keep checking back!

Author's Response: I'm glad you found it interesting :) Thank you for reading! Peace, Virgil

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