Reviews For Christmas Magic
Reviewer: Jane Bilus
Date: 05/09/06 13:21
Chapter: Christmas Magic

loved it so adorable! 10/10

Reviewer: dutch_girl
Date: 05/02/06 16:28
Chapter: Christmas Magic

That was such a sweet story. I totally loved reading it. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: obsessedwithron
Date: 04/16/06 21:03
Chapter: Christmas Magic

Awwwww!!! I love fluff!

Reviewer: doubelieveinmagic23
Date: 02/27/06 19:46
Chapter: Christmas Magic

OMG, that was so sweet!! Seriously, it was really, really good!! I loved it and how it snowed and it was just so magical!!

Reviewer: Snivelly
Date: 02/21/06 13:17
Chapter: Christmas Magic

Oh, this is beautiful! Absolutely wonderful...I couldn't stop smiling throughout the fic. The imagery was perfect, and the characterization was spot-on! Well done!

Author's Response: Thanks Snivelly! You actually sent this review to me on my birthday (yesterday) so what a lovely present! Glad you liked the story. :)

Reviewer: malko050987
Date: 02/11/06 5:41
Chapter: Christmas Magic

Wonderful story. Like everybody else said, your characterisation is spot on. I like the way you created the Christmas atmosphere, and included them, but also set them apart. x.x I suck at describing that. Anyway, it was lovely. One thing, tho. I really don't think Hermione would call Mrs Weasly "Molly".

I like their entire dialogue. Perfectly written. It was obvious that they were very close. Harry's appearance and the familiarity between the three was very good, too. :)

Oh, one other thing. Paragraph formatting. x.x A new paragraph should begin with every new line of dialogue.

Reviewer: Auror81692
Date: 10/25/05 18:13
Chapter: Christmas Magic

Another great Christmas story

Reviewer: Harriet Evans
Date: 08/25/05 7:12
Chapter: Christmas Magic

I love this story. It was one of the first pieces of fanfiction that I ever read and also one of the first to make me realise that fanfiction writing could equate to quality. To be honest, it inspired me to have ago myself - so you have got a lot to answer for! So onto one (very overdue) review. A perfect Hermione/Ron one-shot. Characterisations are spot on, you've got the humour, but you've also got a lovely sense of tenderness that they share. The sensory descriptions are fabulous and the romance beautifully understated. Altogether, quite perfect! (Whoops, I've said 'perfect' twice, but to be honest, I can't think of a better word to describe this loevly story!) Well done.

Reviewer: xadie
Date: 08/24/05 13:38
Chapter: Christmas Magic

What an incredibly sweet and touching piece, I wish I had read it at Christmas! Ron and Hermione were both nicely in character, and I loved the way the story turned their usual bickering into flirtatiousness. All of the descriptive passages were lovely and very lyrical. Ron's speech to Hermione in the secret garden was such a nice rationalisation of why he wanted to tell her how he felt. I loved the whole thing.

Reviewer: kool kat
Date: 08/18/05 11:20
Chapter: Christmas Magic

That was so beautiful. And it wasn't average either. I loved the way that it wasn't after a fight or something, but that they really just loved each other. And it was so sweet the way Ron was afraid of loosing her friendship, and thye were so comfortable around each other. I also really liked the way nature was described, I find it interesting when a setting is well developed, and it most certainly was in this story, with amazing description. Also, I think that the emotions were very real, and how they weren't afraid to be together, but were nervous at the same time. I was very impressed, it's very hard to find a good R/Hr fic these days!:)

Reviewer: Sudha53
Date: 08/03/05 14:11
Chapter: Christmas Magic

This was one of the sweetest stories I have ever read. Your descriptions were wonderful, and most of the dialogues were exceptionally characteristic of the characters speaking. I was amazed, and could feel a flutter in my stomache at every sweet moment. Keep writing, don't give up! You are an amazing writer! Best Regards, Sudha

Reviewer: Sudha53
Date: 08/03/05 14:09
Chapter: Christmas Magic

This was one of the sweetest stories I have ever read. Your descriptions were wonderful, and most of the dialogues were exceptionally characteristic of the characters speaking. I was amazed, and could feel a flutter in my stomache at every sweet moment. Keep writing, don't give up! You are an amazing writer! Best Regards, Sudha

Reviewer: Citha
Date: 07/15/05 0:58
Chapter: Christmas Magic

i had a silly grin on my face the whole time. very good!!

Reviewer: Citha
Date: 07/15/05 0:58
Chapter: Christmas Magic

i had a silly grin on my face the whole time. very good!!

Reviewer: tuttifrutti193
Date: 07/07/05 23:56
Chapter: Christmas Magic

awwwwwwwww i luv dese stories wit diskind of fluff... my

Reviewer: ProfMcG
Date: 04/25/05 18:54
Chapter: Christmas Magic

Aww! I'm so jealous that you thought of this one first! I really liked it, I felt like it was something from my own brain. That's probably the strangest comment you've ever gotten but well....yeah. You might've inspired a story out of me, congradultions! lol *10*

Reviewer: Carmen
Date: 03/22/05 9:45
Chapter: Christmas Magic

This is the best story ever! i only wish there was more to it! love the romance and everything and the great descriptions of the places and everything. absolutely amazing!

Reviewer: A True Weasley
Date: 03/20/05 13:03
Chapter: Christmas Magic

WOHOOOOOO!!!!!that story is SOOOOOO sweet please update!!!!!:)

Author's Response: Um - it's a one shot! :P It won't be updated. That's the end of the story. ;)

Reviewer: rainbowvicki
Date: 03/18/05 14:14
Chapter: Christmas Magic

awwww, great story hun, I love all the decription and it's really sweet!

Reviewer: PhoenixWrath
Date: 03/10/05 9:51
Chapter: Christmas Magic

Awww, Georgia I love it! As another reviewer said, finding good Ron/Hermione stories is hard. You've done a good job with this! I love Ron and Hermione as a pairing, and you put them together so well! Ron was blibbering and Hermione was being maddeningly obvious, the way it should be! I'll have no more of this Ron telling Hermione of his love in great sonnets. R/Hr authors should have to read this story so they can get it right!

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