This is so adorable! Simply wonderful! ~MJ
I found this fanfiction very funny, romantic and most of all real. I think that this fiction isn't like others were they run up and kiss in the most impossible circumstances and say 'I love you, I've loved you forever.' This fiction was REAL and congratulations I really love it and am going to put it in my faves. Please comment back.
I loved this, it was a real pleasure to read. The characters were so very much themselves, I especially liked Ron's dialogue, both spoken and thought. Keep writing.
WOW!!! That was awesome!!! The part where Ron and Hermione are outside together for the first time, when Hermione is talking about how beautiful the night is reminds me of Ren and Ariel's romance scene in "Footloose" the musical. I don't know if you ever saw it, but Ariel was acting just like Hermione was, right before Ren and Ariel sang "Almost Paradise". Verrrrry romantic! (both ur story and "footloose")
again i say beautiful and happy new year
beautiful just beautiful i love it onto my faves it goes, keep up the good work. i am actually writing my own story at the moment so i hope you like it when u finally see it
wow that was fantastic!! i finished reading it and found myself grinning like an idiot! ron and hermione are so adorable and you did magnificently with them!
Beautiful! What a Christmas treasure.
Pax.
this is a wonderful fanfic....brilliantly written. you have serious talent! i really enjoyed it!
Excellent story! Ron is sooooo sweet in this! Great writing!
Imi
THiS WAS THE BEST STORY EVER YOU SHOUlD WRiTE MORE R/HR!!
That was lovely, seeing Ron confess his 'like' to Hermione seems alot more likely than him confessing to being in love.
Which begs the question, is it possible to be 'in like' with someone?
Anyway, very well written.
This is a beautiful story, I enjoyed reading it very much. Now I'm going to see what else you've written!!! Thank you, and keep up the good work!!!
This is a beautiful story, I enjoyed reading it very much. Now I'm going to see what else you've written!!! Thank you, and keep up the good work!!!
Awwwww.... that's so cute... I love it
lovely, sweet, and I wish I had writing skills like you obviously do.
